Reviews for My Parent's Secret Keeper
Bianca Di Angelo 0 chapter 7 . 6/1/2015
that is hilaireous
elijahlover chapter 13 . 3/31/2014
I love this tory so much. It's extremely well written. But please update!
221Bfandomlocked4 chapter 12 . 11/9/2013
((Ah, so I have read this before! [I knew it sounded familiar] And both times I commented about the OOC-ness...well, good story anyway!))
221Bfandomlocked4 chapter 11 . 11/9/2013
I wince every time you misspell trial as trail. Other thanthat's this is a pretty good story, albeit sort of OOC for some chracters.
221Bfandomlocked4 chapter 13 . 3/19/2013
Great story! Although Sirius seemed a little OOC until the epilogue. And his middle name is Orion! But I loved all the angst you put into it, and how you made us wonder which side Remus was on!
Niris chapter 13 . 12/9/2012
I had difficulties to read « My Parent's secret keeper » because I'm French (without lots of english readings) but I really liked it !
Thank you for sharing your fiction.
Child of Dreams chapter 12 . 10/13/2012
Um, Sirius's middle name is Orion.
It's his great-great-great grandfather Phineas, who has Nigellus for a middle name.
WA0520 chapter 10 . 2/19/2012
I still can't tell if Remus is on Sirius' side or not. O_O I'm hopeless.
tfobmv18 chapter 13 . 2/2/2012
I absolutely love it. Keep up the good work.
Luiz4200 chapter 13 . 11/25/2011
If this "Epilouge" is Part 1, where's Part 2?
lover-of-light chapter 13 . 1/9/2011
I wish you all the best, and that you someday become a great writer. However...

I'm sorry, but I did not appreciate your artistic endeavor for the following reasons:

1) Spelling and grammatical errors. Don't be hurt by this, but there are a lot. Each paragraph usually has several blanks where commas should be and at least one spelling error. Please do get somebody to spell-check for you.

2) It's never really clear when any of the chapters take place, except for that ill-placed timeline at the end of chapter 11 when the story is nearly over.

I think that's all I can really tell you without enrolling you into a college writing program.
halfpennybuddha chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
you can change your name, you know sillyface.

And you should also finish your stories! Why dont you write fanfics anymore, I thought you still did? And read them? This is strange. Have you passed all your HP fanfiction-loving onto me? I don't like this. I feel like a dirty whore. GUNDAM WING I LOVE YOU!

And yeah, the story im writing is my chrimbo prezzie to you since im too fucking poor to buy anything. It's romance, so watch out. I promise not to put anything too raunchy in in though...though knowing me it might still be pretty raunchy. I like smut. It's still weird to have to refer to homosexual lovins as ! instead of simply lemon/lime or yaoi/shounen-ai.

and what the hell is with people constantly making DM a veela and then subsiquently getting harry pregnant? That's just wrong. MPREG is weird. veela are weird...though next time you talk to lib you should tell her that ive started to come 'round to her fascination with Tom Felton...hes a fitty.
Cassandra30 chapter 13 . 11/20/2010
Good story. Someone should tell Dumbles and Arthur just how Remus knew Sirius was innocent though ie tell them about Percy's rat going missing and who it really was.
Cassandra30 chapter 12 . 11/20/2010
Cassandra30 chapter 11 . 11/20/2010
These people! I hope Sirius takes Harry out of Wizarding England after his acquittal!
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