Reviews for High Tension, Low Lag
Adryl chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
This is good, it really captures the desperation of the situation. Especially because the GM wants to kill you. ;; I really love the repeating "Ocean of Stars/ I don't know where we are/ I think this is another world". Nice job!
Sylla chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
Definitely a very good poem, I enjoyed reading it, even though I don't make it a habit to read poetry. (Ever.) I don't think I could write a poem were my life to depend on it, so you get extra points for that. XD
Miss Nox chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
Wow, a great poem, I love the 4th part, being in exile, it's great! It's put together really well, you don't get many poems on here so it was really good to read! - Keep it up!