Reviews for How You Go
Elephant Dude chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
I'm not entirely sure if Riku's father is dead or just real sick and lying in a hospital. It doesn't really matter much, though, since the idea is the same, be he dead or dying.

I liked it and I liked it a lot. It was sad and angsty, like most of your stories, and well written. The emotions - despair, sadness - were well displayed. I can just picture Riku on his father's grave or bedside, begging for him to wake up. Well done.
Riku-Rocks chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
This one is very touching and well written. I liked it.

The pace and style are excellent.
time can take its toll chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
Oh, gosh...

That was beautiful. Extremely touching, and very heartfelt. I like the POV, it's all very natural and flows together well. And the buildup to the conclusion is just amazing. I love how it goes from lighthearted conversation, to an ending that sounds incredibly sad and desperate. Just... wow.

This is a definite favorite.
iheartmwpp chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
oh...made me wanna cry...almost thought it was like a letter at first, but then I realized he was trying to get his dad out of it...should've expected something like this, I guess. You really like angsty stuff, don't you? Wow, it was good.
RaieChibiKid chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
Oh wow. I got worried a couple chapters in that the Dad was-...Anyways. The ending was like I could feel him waking up you know? Like he was in a coma, and just at the sound of that last statement...

Powerful. Short and powerful. Wow...
ChibiFrubaGirl chapter 1 . 11/25/2006

This is the besterest parent/Riku fic I've ever read!

How.. How can you get any better as a writer?



If you do write a story better than this...

I just might...


kurohi185 chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
omg! that was so sad! i mean, riku! he wants to go and travel to other worlds and everything but... he had to leave his parents behindT-Tand his dad was sick too

i don't like you anymore...-'' im feeling all emo-like
Howling Dragon 24 chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
That's so sad yet it's an awesome story but sad. Should I be happy that it's a good story or sad becuase it's sad and makes me want to cry and hug some stuffed animal that is dog that I named Riku or to well err I'm not sure.
Trangai chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
I... I love you. Its official. Riku's just heartbreaking in this fic, and I love you so much for writing it. I've never actually read a fic about Riku and his parents - I must go stalking around the internet to find more now -, so it was really nice to find one like this just when I needed it.

"You don’t get sick. You don’t get old. That’s not how you go."

;_; -heart breaks because they're so simple, but so lovely and so heartbreaking I can't help but read it over and over again-
FangedWriter chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
Good story. So sad though, but I guess that's how life is. Keep up the good work!
Gray-Rain Skies chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
Oh my gosh. That moving. I feel so sad for Riku.

This was written in such a convincing way, and really well.

Great job.
RoxasX chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
i liked the story but now im sad but still good story tho.
Lapse - Raevn chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
Bittersweet shot, really. . "You don’t get sick. You don’t get old. That’s not how you go." and "You’ll have the entire time to tell me all the stories you want." made me want to cry.

Seems he paid more than one thing to leave the island.. It's so sad; not being around to be with his parents. And we usually take moms and dads for granted, I think.
Reina-183 chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
SAD! You just temporarily destoyed my happy mood. Great, as always, loved it, utterly depressing.