| Reviews for Fire and Feather |
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   storylistener chapter 1 . 11/22/2006 Very nice begining. WRITE MORE SOON! I like the story so far and I hope you continue. Good Job! |
| Solar Mage chapter 1 . 11/20/2006 Love the story so far can't waint to read what happens next please update soon |
| Fireblade K'Chona chapter 1 . 10/28/2006 Well, m'dear, this is...really quite intense. You wrote it very well, and I look forward to the next chapter...whenever that may be! |
| Flower248 chapter 1 . 10/5/2006 that sounds very interesting, now please write more |
| vaega chapter 1 . 9/30/2006 you evil, evil, evil one. hehe...nice beginning. i have one question, though...where the heck is that village? at first i thought it was Holderkin lands, but then you mentioned the Pelegirs, so now i have no clue. can't wait to see more. wind to thy wings, vaega |
| Deer-Shifter chapter 1 . 9/16/2006 Whew, great start. I'm hooked already. Hurry up and update, please! |
| LavenderStorm chapter 1 . 9/9/2006 You're a first-timer? This story is really quite good, especially if this is your first time. The plot is really quite fast-paced and thrilling. I know that my heart started beating faster right around the time when Kaia became attracted to the pile of wood. However, maybe you could have spent more time on characterization, like showing more of what Kaia's character really is like. Or do you plan to do that in subsequent chapters? If so, then ignore me. Hope you'll keep writing despite your many essays. Update soon! |
| Neverfall chapter 1 . 9/8/2006 I think that the white shape is either a Companion or a bondbird. Since it the Pelagirs (oh, and it's Pelagirs for the hills and Pelgiris for the forest-I'm reading Vows and Honor, so I'm nitpicking) I think that it's slightly more likely to be a bondbird. But you never know. |
| Spots on a Pony chapter 1 . 9/8/2006 Very well done. Please continue when you can. |