Reviews for Nakama
incarnate of evil chapter 3 . 8/17/2010
I like the fact that you promise not to take two months on the next chapter but instead seem to of taken about three years. What's that about, where is the next chapter? I am curious about what will happen, therfore hope that you update soon. :D
incarnate of evil chapter 2 . 8/17/2010
I'm really confused about when Naruto got a devil fruit ability, not to mention what it actually is (the whole light weight bit)? I'm also confused about why he doesn't use any of his Ninja abilities, as if nothing else they are weapons in his arsenal, so to speak. And just to clarify how old is Naruto meant to be?
avatoa chapter 3 . 5/27/2009
Please continue the story for I find it to be totally kickass!
avatoa chapter 2 . 5/27/2009
But if they don't go to Skypeia, how will Nami and Ussop get the weapons that they use during Enies Lobby; how will Zoro learn his Pound Cannon techniques; and where will they get the gold that Franky steals in order to make their new ship, Thousand Sunny?
Lord Blood chapter 2 . 2/6/2009
the fruit naruto ate made him feather-light. how the hell does that relate to him being able to have bullets bounce off of him?
Lord Blood chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
how old exactly is naruto compared to luffy? luffy talks to naruto like he's older than naruto, yet they should be around the same age right now...
RevanLah chapter 3 . 11/7/2008
Just wanted to ask you this: Will the Straw Hat gang go to Triller Bark, and will Shikamaru be with them at this moment? (Because I wonder what would be the result of a fight between Shikamaru and Gecko Moria)
thetrueking chapter 3 . 11/7/2008
love the story please keep it going.
ivan the terrable chapter 3 . 9/27/2008
what exactly does his devil fruit do?

also naruto with gun kage bushin hundreds of people with guns

how is this not useful?

how is the rasengan not useful? from the sounds of it because of the fruit he now sucks at hand to hand combat, with the rasengan he can easily kill anyone who comes within arms reach
ivan the terrable chapter 2 . 9/27/2008
your story leaves me confused. why does naruto not use jutsu? why dosn't he use kuni? is he light or weak? if he is light he should be able to just use the tree climbing trick to stick to the ground and it could let him throw, stab and use jutsu with out sending himself flying.

why dosnt he use any ninja moves? he can walk on water, duplicate himself, picklocks, summon toads, create a whirling ball of near unstoppable distruction, use a replacement jutsu and is fairly strong so why does he not use any of these abilitys? also the thing with robin,being weightless or near it at least makes no difference to either person if one is strangling the other.
kamiam714 chapter 3 . 3/2/2008
too late it has be well over two months. so make more!
Grumpywinter chapter 3 . 2/22/2008
another great chapter and i think akatsuki would side with naruto and the pirates on this one since the world goverment is a threat to them as well, also i think you should have naruto work on one of the pistols for awhile and turn it into a bouble barreled revolver like nero from devil may cry uses
Grumpywinter chapter 2 . 2/22/2008
cool and i really think you should have naruto grow a little taller at least to be luffy's height the kyuubi should be able to do it
Grumpywinter chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
amazing but you are going to have to give naruto some kind of power boast that changes him physically
happyfan13 chapter 3 . 2/11/2008
plz update soon
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