Reviews for We Learned the Sea |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Starting my anual rereading! |
![]() ![]() Rereading. Totally hooked again, and looking forward to the ride. Your writing is engaging, the character dynamics are masterful and you have a neat turn of phrase. Just thought that I'd mention that before I forget to review again as the next chapter will always be calling. I don't remember all the details of the story, but I do remember feeling sad toward the end because it was the end, and I'd have to leave your carefully crafted and immersive universe. Thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh what a beautiful story. Had me close to tears and final chapter was just amazing. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Floo I'm SCREAMING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() first of all: way to go with the foreshadowing. I got a real creepy feeling as soon as she mentioned her apartment. second: how on earth did he know!? *swoons* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm enjoying that you've done this one more from Draco's pov. I think it really complements your writing style |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm convinced that couple was her parents. Somehow he saved them. because he's Draco and he's The Best |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok Floo, the Draco wrapping Hermione in his cloak? I'm melting. cut that shit right out or I'll be nothing but a sappy puddle by the time I reach the end of this fic. (jk no please don't stop) |
![]() ![]() Very well done with this fic! I must say though learning about Snape's fate in the final chapter was a bit of a downer. It makes his life as a spy and killing Dumbledore to protect Draco from killing rather pointless (apart from saving Draco's life and giving intel to the order as a spy), and tragic given it was Draco who convinced him to wait with going back to the order (and I am not one for tragic). One could say he still contributed to Voldemort's fall by allowing Draco to live, but still as that tragedy was a rather big downer on the feelgood happy end chapter, I would have liked to learn about it before the final chapter and maybe something to give more emotional closure on that tragedy like the characters honoring Snape's contribution. |
![]() ![]() That outside swing with warming charms is a dream, I want one too :-). One of the best getting-together scenes I've ever read in a fanfic. "he'd even live for her" :-) Well done! |
![]() ![]() Not surpeised indeed, there were heavy hints! |
![]() ![]() Nice one! I like that Hermione still has reservations, because unless he did not actually Jill you know who I’m talking about, then I can’t accept any forgiveness this soon haha. I’m a vengeful witch |
![]() ![]() Nice! Although I can’t believe she’s the one who apologised… I can’t say I understand her perspective at the moment, I wouldn’t want to be anything nice to him if I were in her shoes |
![]() ![]() I still hope he didn’t kill them! Ps: not sure you can get that drunk with half a bottle of wine, especially if you’re European and with that corpulence :-D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok I cried (just a little bit ;). This ending was simply perfect. Thank you for it! |