|Reviews for Seabreeze|
| YouAreBeforeEverything chapter 20 . 10/2/2013
I love your writing... These one-shots are perfect... Haruka and Michiru forever!
| 0oNonnieo0 chapter 13 . 7/26/2013
I really love your stories! I don't know much english and I don't know why your english is so complicated to me :P but I do a lot of effort to read it because I like very much how you captured Michiru and haruka's escence (sorry my bad english) they're my favourite couple and I hope you write more stories, you're great :)
| LexaLaneLK chapter 20 . 7/16/2013
I loved it all. Thank you for sharing this with us.
| shadowphantomness chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Brilliant! I thought this chapter was wonderfully funny, and oh, poor Haruka and Michiru. They finally thought that they had some time to themselves, but it was not to be. The image of Usagi trying to break in through the window to get the hibachi shrimp is particularly in-character, while this line was probably the funniest part, but certainly an image I'd like to see.
"Sugoi! Aren't they just the perfect couple?" Minako exclaimed, hearts in her eyes. "They are probably going to go on some romantic date! And then there will be dancing! And flowers! And music! And then Haruka-san will propose! Michiru-san will say yes of course! The wedding! Oh it'll be marvelous! Michiru-san will be so beautiful in a marriage kimono! And Haruka-san so handsome! We'll all be invited! And there…" Minako was getting herself carried a way with the whole idea, but none of her friends put a stop to it.
Usagi echoed Minako's sentiments, tears in her eyes and hands clasped in front of her in exuberance.
| Gwaeren chapter 20 . 6/26/2012
Love the finish to this. I really do. Anything that can end with me smiling like a kid in a candy store is a good thing.
| Pawnee15 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Well, well. You're a terrible liar! In my opinion your writing style is very good! I'm a new member but I already read a lot of stories and I also came across writing styles I didn't like. But yours is not okay or readable, it's great! And you're funny too. ) I really enjoyed it.
I still have 19 one-shots to go. Can't wait to go on.
Thanks for writing and keep going!
| Gwaeren chapter 16 . 6/25/2012
Adorable! and one of my own fantasies, really. Not the sex part, but just being at sunrise, staring across the ocean. It just sounds so serene. Beautiful, really.
| Gwaeren chapter 15 . 6/25/2012
1. What has been your favorite oneshot? If I reviewed it, it likely is one of my favs. :-) The reason would likely be hinted at in the review, if not outright stated.
2. What has been your least favorite oneshot? Is there such a thing? Really?
3. Has my writing improved? Yes, but I stand by what I said in the first chapter - you lied. Your writing was amazing to begin with.
4. What do you like/dislike about my writing? You show things, rather than 'tell'. You let the reader SEE how the people feel, or why they do things, rather than just say it. Saying a person is jealous, but never showing them acting like it is just plain silly - and you never do that. Plus, you're rather good at keeping close to canon-characters.
5. Is there something you would like to see more/less of? nada, zilch, zip for less. As for more? Just more fic. Fic is good. lol
6. Should I stop with Seabreeze sometime soon and move on to a different project? This seems to be a moot point at this moment in time...
7. What has been your favorite/least favorite moment(s) in any of the oneshots. I couldn't pick just one. But I'm a huge sucker for hurt/comfort. So cute.
8. Should I be eaten by a large kraken for even making this survey-ish thing? A kraken? See, this is why you're a good author. Your mind jumps to the wild and unusual without pause. But no, no kraken for you.
| Gwaeren chapter 11 . 6/24/2012
Normally I don't like things that lend to embarrassment. I start feeling the same as the characters and it's all MEH. But this? This is freaking brilliant. Gah, well played, and well done.
| Gwaeren chapter 6 . 6/23/2012
Awww, the infamous Haruka-pout! Loved this chapter in particular. _
| Gwaeren chapter 3 . 6/23/2012
*snort* Poor Setsuna. Poor, poor Setsuna... *cackles*
| Gwaeren chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
You liiiiiie! You said in your author's note that you don't write well. Pfft. Could have fooled me! Brilliant first chapter, and I'm about to dive into the rest. :-)
| bemyserendipity chapter 11 . 7/28/2011
And I thought chapter 9 was amusing! HA! This was one was just so... -sigh- amusing
| bemyserendipity chapter 17 . 7/28/2011
Hiya! I loved this chapter. Hotaru/Sailor Saturn was always one of my favorite characters.
I was wondering though, where'd you get that quote or did you make it up yourself? Oh wait, you don't know what I'm talking about... I meant this: 'In the end, it is not the years of your life that count, but the life in your years.' Michiru says it. I was wondering where you got it.
Please write back!
| venz07 chapter 20 . 7/5/2011
OMGEEE!I LOVE this one shot!it made me lol and lmao and rofl and hahaha. my bros were wondering if I had gone mad. xD Anywayz, thank you for a nice one shot collection of Haruka and Michiru :)