|Reviews for The Halloween party|
| DAnNSfreak chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
That was a good plot, but where is the punctuation? It's kinda hard to read... better put them in! ;-b
| The Awesome One chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
It was good but kinda confusing. You need quotation marks, becuase I couldn't understand who was saying what. Other than that it was good. I love fluffy stories.
| dddynamite chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
Aw hehe I loved it!
| musafa chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
it's a good story, but you need to punctuate it. i don't know where one person stops speaking and the other starts.
| chili-peppers chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
oh wow that was great! i loved it