Reviews for The 10th attempt
maple-leaf96 chapter 1 . 10/7/2009

*points and laughs at the desperate toad sannin*


great job LAWL~

Joyasafriend chapter 1 . 3/25/2009

Litany Riddle chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
Hum... Apo, tu me donnerais pas une version approximative en french s'il te plait ? Parce que je sais pas ce que j'ai mais ce soir mes neuronnes refusaient de fonctionner alors que pourtant G lu pire en anglais _ _

Et puis toutes tes fics sont bien je peux pas critiquer chez toi XD
Sassy chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
Please write more! 8D I wanna see the ending!
Orochimaruluver chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
It was ok kinda funny
PaperDragonfly chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
This was really cute! There were some wee grammar mistakes, but over all it made sense. I wish I knew French; then I could read your other fics!

Loved it!

azab chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
i liked it
Niver chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
narutodbzgt chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
on peu avoir la version française?
Kohaku Kawa chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
No! You can't end it there. It's too cute!

I really, really, want to read the rest!

I think it is great that you are posting this in englis, because I cannot read French at all. So thank you very very much.

by the way, I can read this story fine the way it is. but if you wanted someone to go through and correct the grammar I can do that for you. just pm me.
HitoriEdo chapter 1 . 11/20/2006
its so cute how jiraiya rambles!

good story!
Rambie chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
It's a good idea, but you really, REALLY need to get an english-speaking beta reader. The fact that you don't speak english well doesn't make the fic any less hard to read. x.o
Demon King Piccolo chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
Interesting fic.

There is some grammar errors, but overall, your grasp of English is very good. However, you could improve your story by making paragraphs.
Yohko the demo chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
C'est sympa comme tout de t'y être mise aussi vite par contre j'aimerais bien que tu mettes les credits (je sais plus le mot en français, nan mais vraiment!) et que tu renvoies les reviews vers moi quand ils concernent l'histoire en elle-même et non la traduction, merci beaucoup