Reviews for Mary Sue Askew
a sorceress girl chapter 10 . 9/21/2016
i know this fic is ten years old (holy shit omg) but i had to leave a review. despite it being deliberately written to be a mary sue fic, this is rather well-written? from a character standpoint anyway. there were some "unrealistic" things about lizzie (like her batman past lmao) but people, especially ones around her age, do stupid things all the time like "falling in love' with people they just met. the relationships felt rather organic as well and everyone felt rather in character! i loved how you tied everything together and fit it into the askewniverse timeline IT WAS REALLY NEAT.
blondebabe800 chapter 10 . 1/25/2012
Just finished the whole thing. Absolutely hilarious! I giggled the whole way through.
livingstorywriter101 chapter 10 . 7/20/2009
I really liked the story :) Felt bad for pretty much everyone in the end but that's really how life is for a lot of people. There aren't very many happy endings in real life :( But I really do like the story
Straight Edge Queen chapter 10 . 11/16/2008
Great story!
Bustedwitch chapter 10 . 2/10/2008
Holy shit make a sequel dude!

there aren't enough jay/oc fics out there and I'm ordering you to make a sequel-

Liked the stry btw
Raging Raven chapter 10 . 3/18/2007
Great story.

I loved it.
Ladywilde chapter 9 . 12/18/2006
m. Things are getting intresing, I am liking!

I love how you have interwoven all the characters so well and at the same time actually made your Mary Sue likeable. ( That is a grand and amazing feat my dear! ) Good stuff and thanks for posting...

I will so be reading...
psychonerd5 chapter 10 . 12/10/2006
Hey there, I'm too lazy to log in right now.

Aw man it's over. Sucks so much that everyone is broken up. But hey this is what sort of opens up the beginning of the View Askewniverse.

I loved the story because I got all the for writing it.
ZGory chapter 9 . 12/4/2006
Awesome. You showed Julie Dwyer pre-mortem.

This chapter was great (yet sad in so many levels) because we get to see all these things that are referenced to throughout the Askewniverse. Will Dante ever find out about Caitlin's relationship with Alyssa?

I just have one suggestion. Could you please add dividers when going into other narratives? That's all.
ZGory chapter 8 . 11/27/2006
I need to put this story on my alert list becaue I always forget to check on certain categories.

How could I have forgotten the big bee! Thanks for reminding me.

Liked the little Batman touch. That was cool. This story is perfect except for the Mary Sue. But then all the cool View Askew references overcloud that.

Loved that bit of Mallrats at the end. I can't believe that Randal almost told Lizzie about the cousin who snapped his neck trying to reach his thingie.

Great chapter. I love this story.
Ladywilde chapter 8 . 11/14/2006
What have you done... could I be possibly liking a *gasp* Mary Sue... oh please, say it isn't so...

I loves it...
ZGory chapter 7 . 11/12/2006
I was almost afraid that you had gotten bored with this story! Glad to see your computer is up and running again.

Loved that Chasing Amy reference. You sure do bring up a lot of good points about stuff that is bound to happen.

Will you ever reference anything to the shortlived Clerks television series? Sometimes they talked about Randal and Dante in their younger days. And they said Jay was still in the fourth grade.

Great funny chapter. Can't wait until the next one. Thanks for telling us when Clerks II comes out on DVD!
Ladywilde chapter 7 . 11/9/2006
I like the new chapter...

Randall is really cute in this... a lot nicer then one would imagine but I really love the way you write the characters and please, please, please more Brodie :)
ENZIO chapter 6 . 10/18/2006
\Im not to good at reviews\

I can say Id love to see more,

and you got the view askew character personality's perfect
Ladywilde chapter 6 . 9/21/2006
I like were this is going... I am pretty impressed considering that this is for all intents and purposes a *gasp* *choke* Mary Sue... but it is also widly addictive... more of Bob and Amy... please and Jay and Randall need to brawl over are spearkly eyed heroine... awesome job! update soon...
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