Reviews for The Memory
Mitts chapter 22 . 7/1/2007
Sir Edward...I am so proud of you. Your writing style is coming on leaps and bounds. You are beginning to add so much more detail to your stories, and reading them are a real pleasure.

Long may you continue...
Random Reviewer 2 chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
Cid and Yuffie...that's a couple I never even IMAGINED. But then again you know my position on Yuffentine :)

Apathy is my FAVORITE word. Seriously, it's so cold yet so cool.

lol

So is this while AVALANCHE is still on their quest to destroy Shinra?
Mitts chapter 21 . 3/16/2007
Aw Sir Edward...That was such a sad chapter...I don't want Aeris to die..(even though I know I have no choice in the matter...Sephiroth will see to that!)

Hope you have a good holiday with your family...
xslavextoxsephirothx chapter 13 . 3/8/2007
AH! Ok...ok...as you can see, I am a slave to Sephiroth...lol

His appearance in this chapter...oh dear...oh god...it got me squirming!

He is SO hot and you just...ah! You did it just right...

However...once again, I almost CRIED when Cloudy stabbed him. But, I know it had to be done, lol...and the fact that it was with Masamune made it kick even more ass...

But still, *sniffle* he is my master, I can morn a little...

hehe

Really, though I am loving this!
xslavextoxsephirothx chapter 11 . 3/8/2007
Aww...you gave me tears!

Everyones crying for Cloudy...and now I am...lol

But ooh...Yuffie saw/heard Cid, huh?

I can't wait to read some more...
Mitts chapter 16 . 1/18/2007
I love that part where Cloud says...'I'm a stubborn bastard'. That just about sums him up...lol

Glad to see you haven't abandoned your story. Like I said, even if you don't get the reviews you deserve, just write the story for yourself...think of it as practice!

Good to have you back, though!
Mitts chapter 13 . 11/13/2006
'I am invincible'...Sephiroth is so full of himself, isn't he?..lol..

Oh, and what's this about Cloud not sleeping alone?..Definately going to keep reading to find out what's going on there!
Mitts chapter 11 . 10/27/2006
Hey...an update,about time too!...I hope you know I got out of my sick bed to read this, lol...and it was worth it too!

I loved poor Cids attitude at the end of the chapter. Aww, poor Cid!...
Aquawyrm chapter 10 . 10/14/2006
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This fic has taken a turn for the dark...
Mitts chapter 10 . 10/14/2006
No...Sir Edward...You can't kill Cloud, you just can't!...You'd better bring him back from the dead, or I'll never review again, lol...Just kidding...

I loved Barrett in this chapter..."I am a man of my word, I just forget to remember!" I had a chuckle at that, very good!

So, that's two members of the group 'dead'...what happens now?
Aquawyrm chapter 9 . 10/7/2006
Somehow, I really don't think that Vincent is dead. I look forward to the next chapter.

But, seriously, I wouldn't be one bit surprised if Vincent regenerated, or had a decentralized ciruculatory system or something, and came back to break everybody out of the place. *snickers*
Lita Lightning chapter 9 . 10/6/2006
HE CANT BE DEAD HE JUST CANT...pease bring vinnie back him dead is not a good thing...though i am likin the story...just not the vinnie dead part
Mitts chapter 9 . 10/6/2006
NO! Vincent can't be dead..can he?...
Mitts chapter 8 . 10/2/2006
So, Cloud has finally come clean and bared his soul to the rest of the group, thanks to Yuffie and her outspokeness...I like Yuffie!

I still think he should have gone with his instincts though, and crawled into bed with Aeris, (heehee!)...
Mitts chapter 7 . 9/25/2006
I liked the part where Hojo threatened them with the torture of loud music, lol..Reminds me of myself, I can't sleep unless it's dead quiet and dark! I think I would have surrendered my name too...Especially if it was 'rap' music being played...ah, the agony..lol..(ok, other reviewers kindly take note, just because I don't like 'rap', doesn't make it bad!)...
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