Reviews for A Scary Thought
AstroKitty chapter 52 . 4h
Yeessss thank you for your yearly update! I really like how you've written Herb and I can't wait to see what happens! Update soon! (I'm hoping you update early 2018, bc that would be awesome. The wait time for this fic is suspenseful lol. I've graduated high school and college in the time it's been written and it's been fun to follow xD)
Coffee chapter 52 . 10/10
Well I didn't expect to see an update for this today.

It's good to see one of the old classics come back to life.
Guast chapter 51 . 8/13/2016
Just from skimming this, this is either a "reasonable/realistic" type fanic or a "self-indulgent" type fanfic (like with "Godlike Naruto harem crossovers"). If this story were more like the latter type, then I for one might find it interesting if some offhanded way were found for Cologne to keep her youthful appearance (like with mushrooms, some artifact/curse, etc.). But given the effort given to establish "limits and rules" with said technique, something tells me that this story is of the "reasonable/realistic" type and we won't see this happen. Ah well, I have no doubt this is probably a good story in its own right anyways, so good luck!
Accursed Editor chapter 51 . 7/21/2016
Corrections offered without malice.
"I'd... hadn't" I…hadn't
"There skill level is very high," Their
"What are you upto" up to
"I didn't detecting" detect
"from Peaches shoulder " Peach's
"her replacements actions," replacement's
"not all Gorgon's turn people" Gorgons
"all Gorgon's into magic?" Gorgons

I look forward to more.
Guest chapter 50 . 7/21/2016
"when they want too." want to.
«" I do, Sorora"» Sorora."
"My most humblest apologies. " most humble
Guest chapter 49 . 7/21/2016
" first to forced to her next level" be forced
" she taunt before" taunted
" everyone of them" every one
"her's" hers
"Damn rights." Damn right.
Guest chapter 48 . 7/21/2016
" tight-nit community," tight-knit
"you're life it a bit on the complicated side" your life is
" conssstricking " conssstricting
" overwhelming dominated by men" overwhelmingly
Guest chapter 47 . 7/21/2016
"the field of the Furinkan High." the field of the Furinkan High what?
"We never seen " We never saw
"an enigma figure " enigmatic figure
"Energy is a physical phenomena." phenomenon.
"the shear speed " sheer
" the elders presence" elder's
"size of it's anchor" its
"It is your weariness that will hold you back " wariness
Guest chapter 46 . 7/21/2016
"her current whereabouts was " were
"Usagi unresponsive face" Usagi's
"its an anniversary " it's
Guest chapter 45 . 7/21/2016
"the Grand magus" Grand Magus
"We're her other appendices," apprentices
" I can setup in?" set up
Accursed Editor chapter 43 . 7/21/2016
"brother sister pair " brother-sister pair
" makes my cloths, " clothes,
"a table setup" set up
"Fiancee." Fiancée.
"dance ware" wear
"Kitsui was unnecessarily revealing, " Kitsui's
" which lead to " led to
" Rippas final attack," Rippa's
"fairing very well, " faring
"be more gentile," gentle,
" ala my teacher" á la
"shear ki enhanced" sheer
"redirect by attack, " my
" sweety," sweetie,
"the new comer " newcomer
"oogling," ogling
"how... usual her style," unusual
"become increasing accustomed "increasingly
Guest chapter 42 . 7/21/2016
"annoyance which Shampoo seemed oblivious too." annoyance to which Shampoo seemed oblivious.
"wack-job principle's " whack-job principal's
"peaked Happosai's interests," piqued Happosai's interests
"passers by " passersby or passers-by
" considering the forceful approached, " approach,
"a warriors hair" a warrior's
" goin then" goin'
" for safety sake, " safety's
" likely it actually something" it's
" I can't certain image general principles of defense." Needs a rewrite. "I can't imagine certain general principles of defense won't help."
Guest chapter 41 . 7/21/2016
"you preform." perform
" fairly equally match martial arts dancers " equally-matched
"discretely handing Ranma " discreetly
" Shampoo slightly more damp cloths," Shampoo's slightly more damp clothes,
"I may not of fought" may not have
Guest chapter 40 . 7/21/2016
"she come out ahead. " came out ahead.
"the dinning room if" dining
" a bother and sister" brother
"wolluped" walloped
" the full extend" extent
" interest had peeked at" interest was piqued
" Shampoo's interested continued " interest
"his interested peeked slightly." his interest was piqued
" without it's penalties." its
"would not due " do
" get it's hands on" its
"a train wreak" wreck
" at it's core still dance," its
" I seen the master " I saw
Accursed Editor chapter 39 . 7/21/2016
"awaiting it's passengers." its
" to be lead astray." led
" quickly lead to her relaxing" led
" never been to earth, " Earth,
"a-typical " atypical
"on the moon" on the Moon
"sear beauty of it all." sheer beauty
" sweeting our arrangement slightly" sweetening
"that lead to a particular problem." led
"Using her orb, Pluto light the way." Pluto lit the way.
"and lead them the remaining way" led
"a U shaped grove " groove
"main power supplies are drain, " drained,
" much of the details" many of the details
"much of the controls " many of the controls
"Shampo shook " Shampoo
"beating Ranma at everyone." every one.
" to simple find a nice corner" simply
"hall around her somewhere" here
"for a plague or other inscription." plaque or other thing bearing an inscription.
"how about Sailor Moon's armor." Question mark.
" designed the uniformed deliberately" uniforms
"recognize the symbolics here" recognize the symbols here
" this lead to" led
"have you too get a little closer " you two
"Shampoo drive and ability." Shampoo's
" Insolent welp!" whelp!
" opted for the later." latter.
" made is way to the isle, " made his way to the aisle,
"the website is back up as hosted/derekloffin" as usual censored by FFN
"It so much funner " It's so much more fun
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