goodness i need almost 2 weeks to read your story up until now, your story is amazing, interesting, exciting, funny and romantic too i love it please please please write further or upload the next chapter
that would be really great of you. *lots of delicious cookies for you*

I first read this back in 2000 or so and when I got back into fanfiction recently I was glad to see that it had been expanded upon considerably since I had last read it. Hopefully we'll still get updates periodically, though it does look to have been awhile at this point.

I have actually been particularly interested in the focus of the last 10-15 chapters where you are examining how Ranma and Shampoo are looking to grow and reclaim the fire that really drives a martial artist to the pinnacle of the art. I also really enjoyed the expansion on Ukyou's fighting abilities- the treatment of a battle aura as a fire that can be tended was inspired. The way the Hiryuu Shoten Ha backfired during that fight was great too and it will be interesting to see her try to regain some of her confidence.

Great story, you make a realistic 'fighter Kasumi' without losing the essential Kasumi character. Frost, though, lacks imagination. Bed too complex and heavy? Conjure hammock. :P

Ok that was literally the best remake of that bedroom sneak in scene I've ever read. Laughed for about 10 mins, you sir are a genius. Nodoka lol

I don't know why it took me so long to get around to reading this, I mean I've read Shampoo 1/2 as well as A Very Scary Thought, and yet I just this morning finished this. Good job is all I can say, I loved it, though I do wonder why it has so few reviews for a fic that's been on here for as long as this one has.

The only thing I'm really wondering about at this point is whether the eventual mini-war is going to be Amazons and the (new) NWC vs Kitsunes, or Amazons vs Kitsunes with NWC stopping the conflict. I also have to question a single point here, specifically the absence of a girl whose solitary goal in life is to get into a class like Kasumi's. Seriously, how long until Haruhi shows up? Especially with the new nature of Usagi's power...

I loved the background and history to the Kuonji family it was incredibly creative and original and works well with their somewhat ninja like theme from the original series, I love the multiplication technique it's an awesome idea!

Awesome chapter, I really like the idea behind of Kuonji family forbidden techniques and the stuff related to C-Chan worked great.

Readable but scary! For me the situation is a base of negima but all the caracters are OOC.
Call the PPC!

"We're her other appendices" Should be "We're her other apprentices".
They are people, not parts of a book.

The student mentor thing with Shampoo and So Pu reminded me of Jim Bader's work with Nabiki and Lotion from A Tale of Two Wallets. It was nifty and I'm curious to see where that leads. And it's kinda chilling how using the spirit power lessens the lifespan, even though the lifespan is extended beyond anything we could easily comprehend.

I gotta admit, the Senshi part kinda petered out. I was expecting some type of mega-confrontation and what we got was... politics. I'm actually wondering what the whole point of it was. The history part was fleshed out, but it kinda repeated the same plot points as the Moon Kingdom failing.

The part with Gosunkugi was funny though, being offered apprenticeship with the lich guy.

Keep at it!

That certainly was a quick update! Not use to that... Sorry I didn't get to this sooner, but I've lost a lot of interest in the Ranma fandom as of late and I often forget to come here to check on updates.

So Lemon finally got caught. I find her kinda annoying but I'd like to see her learn her lesson here.

I see So Pu and Hairbrush are somewhat reminiscent of D.B. Sommer's take on them. They're funny that way.

The senshi section is getting prickly it seems. Some very powerful forces at work that seem more than willing to wipe everything from their path to get what they want.

Neat stuff! Looking forward to more!

You story is interesting and unique,but it doesn't have any charm that Ranma character the person below, the obvious(at least to me,I could be wrong) reason is that you use Kasumi,which I might add is , no one ever writes about Kasumi in the main light,no alot of people is attracted to Kasumi and 'love' her character enough to warrant even looking at your of them would just call your fanfiction after a fast look OOC replacing Kasumi input into the they see you fanfiction as a typical insertion of a new character and therefore nothing special.

RANT: I really wish to see a fanfiction base on the manga Ranma, that doesn't involve him talking like a red neck from down south,never showing any creativity in fighting and is just a Stronger version of akane. MY goodness is there is no scheming manipulative Ranma, with the ability to improvise in a fight and willing to hold back his ability like in the manga,while not being giant egotistical person that keep thinking about his past accomplishment,and is afraid of RYOGA who is not even a real rival.(He only win dueing slap stick comedy section or when ranma is depowered,or he is empowered) I only saw god-like Ranma that destroy everything with stats and technique(overpower) and no skill,willing to use lethal technique on everyone.(often in Naruto fanfiction)Shown to be incapable of overcoming any technique after there initial , where are the reasonable smart canon Ranma that doesn't have idiot ball(Anime Ranma and Gambling King) or a freaking canon sue(Average person with strong powers/stats) instead of being the ace(a person able to adapt and grow/thrive in most situation). I sincerely swear that when I read fanfiction,almost all of the Ranma I know are complete idiots/average/above average at best.

LMAO! The Kistune Corner almost reminds me of Cardcaptors' Kero's corner. lol. Good chapter. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Ah, don't worry about updating in big chunks of time. I certainly can't complain, given how long my updates take.

As for the update, nice to see another one. This eighth circle ceremony has been building up for quite a long time, with plenty on the line. I'm looking forward to seeing how it all turns out.

Nice to see that Soun didn't flip his lid. He's got a better head on his shoulders in this universe than I gave him credit for.

Also looking forward to how this date turns out. It's going to be a doozy!

Till then!