Reviews for A Scary Thought
Guast chapter 51 . 8/13/2016
Just from skimming this, this is either a "reasonable/realistic" type fanic or a "self-indulgent" type fanfic (like with "Godlike Naruto harem crossovers"). If this story were more like the latter type, then I for one might find it interesting if some offhanded way were found for Cologne to keep her youthful appearance (like with mushrooms, some artifact/curse, etc.). But given the effort given to establish "limits and rules" with said technique, something tells me that this story is of the "reasonable/realistic" type and we won't see this happen. Ah well, I have no doubt this is probably a good story in its own right anyways, so good luck!
Accursed Editor chapter 51 . 7/21/2016
Corrections offered without malice.
"I'd... hadn't" I…hadn't
"There skill level is very high," Their
"What are you upto" up to
"I didn't detecting" detect
"from Peaches shoulder " Peach's
"her replacements actions," replacement's
"not all Gorgon's turn people" Gorgons
"all Gorgon's into magic?" Gorgons

I look forward to more.
Guest chapter 50 . 7/21/2016
"when they want too." want to.
«" I do, Sorora"» Sorora."
"My most humblest apologies. " most humble
Guest chapter 49 . 7/21/2016
" first to forced to her next level" be forced
" she taunt before" taunted
" everyone of them" every one
"her's" hers
"Damn rights." Damn right.
Guest chapter 48 . 7/21/2016
" tight-nit community," tight-knit
"you're life it a bit on the complicated side" your life is
" conssstricking " conssstricting
" overwhelming dominated by men" overwhelmingly
Guest chapter 47 . 7/21/2016
"the field of the Furinkan High." the field of the Furinkan High what?
"We never seen " We never saw
"an enigma figure " enigmatic figure
"Energy is a physical phenomena." phenomenon.
"the shear speed " sheer
" the elders presence" elder's
"size of it's anchor" its
"It is your weariness that will hold you back " wariness
Guest chapter 46 . 7/21/2016
"her current whereabouts was " were
"Usagi unresponsive face" Usagi's
"its an anniversary " it's
Guest chapter 45 . 7/21/2016
"the Grand magus" Grand Magus
"We're her other appendices," apprentices
" I can setup in?" set up
Accursed Editor chapter 43 . 7/21/2016
"brother sister pair " brother-sister pair
" makes my cloths, " clothes,
"a table setup" set up
"Fiancee." Fiancée.
"dance ware" wear
"Kitsui was unnecessarily revealing, " Kitsui's
" which lead to " led to
" Rippas final attack," Rippa's
"fairing very well, " faring
"be more gentile," gentle,
" ala my teacher" á la
"shear ki enhanced" sheer
"redirect by attack, " my
" sweety," sweetie,
"the new comer " newcomer
"oogling," ogling
"how... usual her style," unusual
"become increasing accustomed "increasingly
Guest chapter 42 . 7/21/2016
"annoyance which Shampoo seemed oblivious too." annoyance to which Shampoo seemed oblivious.
"wack-job principle's " whack-job principal's
"peaked Happosai's interests," piqued Happosai's interests
"passers by " passersby or passers-by
" considering the forceful approached, " approach,
"a warriors hair" a warrior's
" goin then" goin'
" for safety sake, " safety's
" likely it actually something" it's
" I can't certain image general principles of defense." Needs a rewrite. "I can't imagine certain general principles of defense won't help."
Guest chapter 41 . 7/21/2016
"you preform." perform
" fairly equally match martial arts dancers " equally-matched
"discretely handing Ranma " discreetly
" Shampoo slightly more damp cloths," Shampoo's slightly more damp clothes,
"I may not of fought" may not have
Guest chapter 40 . 7/21/2016
"she come out ahead. " came out ahead.
"the dinning room if" dining
" a bother and sister" brother
"wolluped" walloped
" the full extend" extent
" interest had peeked at" interest was piqued
" Shampoo's interested continued " interest
"his interested peeked slightly." his interest was piqued
" without it's penalties." its
"would not due " do
" get it's hands on" its
"a train wreak" wreck
" at it's core still dance," its
" I seen the master " I saw
Accursed Editor chapter 39 . 7/21/2016
"awaiting it's passengers." its
" to be lead astray." led
" quickly lead to her relaxing" led
" never been to earth, " Earth,
"a-typical " atypical
"on the moon" on the Moon
"sear beauty of it all." sheer beauty
" sweeting our arrangement slightly" sweetening
"that lead to a particular problem." led
"Using her orb, Pluto light the way." Pluto lit the way.
"and lead them the remaining way" led
"a U shaped grove " groove
"main power supplies are drain, " drained,
" much of the details" many of the details
"much of the controls " many of the controls
"Shampo shook " Shampoo
"beating Ranma at everyone." every one.
" to simple find a nice corner" simply
"hall around her somewhere" here
"for a plague or other inscription." plaque or other thing bearing an inscription.
"how about Sailor Moon's armor." Question mark.
" designed the uniformed deliberately" uniforms
"recognize the symbolics here" recognize the symbols here
" this lead to" led
"have you too get a little closer " you two
"Shampoo drive and ability." Shampoo's
" Insolent welp!" whelp!
" opted for the later." latter.
" made is way to the isle, " made his way to the aisle,
"the website is back up as hosted/derekloffin" as usual censored by FFN
"It so much funner " It's so much more fun
Accursed Editor chapter 38 . 7/21/2016
More typos:
"healing remarkable fast. " remarkably
" teach it too me?" to
"marriage latter?" ladder
" older Amazon's replied" Amazons
"was no where in sight" nowhere
"Kitune" Kitsune
«We'll talk later.» is missing closing quote
" some how scanned" somehow
"thru" through
"someone around her " here
"as the elder lead the way inside." led
"peak their interest" pique
"You... seen her then?" either "You've…seen her then?" or "You…saw her then?"
"of the rooms many bookshelves " room's
"The robbed man" robed
" harmed in anyway" any way
" back up as hosted/derekloffin." Redacted by FFN per usual.
Accursed Editor chapter 37 . 7/21/2016
"shear luck " sheer
"only ones dying her will be you," here
" to Shampoo fallen form." Shampoo's
" Dragon Fast Fist" Fang?
"can receive a more proper examine." examination.
"maguses" magi
" sub-dimensional plain," plane
"My Uncle taunt me many lessons " taught
" it's power is fundamental " its
" how you fair" fare
"Your so overwhelmed" You're
"get out of their Kasumi!" there
"juvee" juvie
"thru" is still supposed to be through
" Street Figher." Fighter
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