Well, that was both morbid and thrilling in equal measure. Very nice story.

A really great story! Poor Sora - selfless to the end.

OMGGGGG...that...was actually really sad D: Sora gave up his lifeforce to heal Roxas and Roxas mistakenly takes him out T_T

i really feel sorry for sora... i wonder how the others are going to react when they find out what happened.

This is interesting. I like this story.

Amazingly well written! I love it! But...WHY?! WHY ROXAS, WHY?! *Sob*

aww poor sora. thanks for sharing

whyyyyyy didnt u continue it...i think u had something going with this story

oh. oh dear god #$%&*() that was amazing. I loved how incredibly human you kept everything- and kept everything feeling canon and real and bwuh, that /ending/. Brilliantly written and developed- I imagine this to be the literary equivalent of a very lovingly-prepared loaf of bread. And it is just as delicious.

thank you so much! This made my morning. (:

Oh, my God. This was fantastic. I love what you did with the characterizations and the whole idea of the story and dhsdhsffgsahfdjhfg. Feelings.

This was flawless.

—Mel

This was a beautifully written, gripping one shot. I think I loved it so much because I can totally imagine this actually happening in cannon, you wrote the characters so believably. Though what a tearjerking ending! I finished the fic and sat there for a good ten minutes feeling quite upset. Which I suppose it a good thing because it just shows how wrapped up I was in the story.

Oh.

Oh dear.

On a separate note: really excellent writing. As saddening and somewhat frightening the last few bits and the ending were, really really well done.

This was absolutely wonderful. I have to cling desperately to the knowledge that Nobodies become their former selves again when they regain their hearts in order to not be very, very depressed.

Sora. :'( You made me like him more than Roxas.

This is definitely a piece of art, though it's a tad bit dark. I have to admit the ending con fussed me.

If there was ever any doubt that you're one of the best, if not the best, writers to ever touch on Kingdom Hearts, this cements it.

It was Axel written the way he should be - always dangerous, capable of doing reprehensible things, but so charismatic and so devoted to the one person that matters to him.

And Sora...I confess to the occasional moment of disliking canon Sora, but can never follow through on it soley because of the character traits you've so perfectly captured here. In the end, it's not the keyblade or the journeys to save the world that make Sora a hero, but the staunch unwillingness to give up in the face of despair, and the fact that he'd rather sacrifice himself in an instant than see someone truly suffer.

Altogether, it's just...wow. Horrific, beautiful, tragic, uplifting, and occasionally hilarious.

I long for an iota of your talent.