Reviews for There Wasn't
Nightwhisper chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
that was good, but i have to say the ending annoyed me...
Sora Tayuya chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Woah. This was, to say the least, superbly written. This whole idea was wonderful, if a bit dark. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, and am adding it to my favorites so that I may enjoy it again soon.

The ending, surprised me definitely, yet it seemed to be the plot you were going for ultimately. Wonderfully done, and thank you for this unusual but somewhat deserved ending.
Favored chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
This is certainly sort of creepy. But Roxas came back in the end - and he got his heart back.

Although Sora died... Sorta dark for a kingdom Hearts fic, but also appropriate. Very nicely written!
Starr Bryte chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
Whoa... My friend, Everfire, was right when she said this fanfic was underappreciated... This is a true gem...

She started reading it at our fanfiction reading group and I finished reading it on my own today. Wow. Just wow...

I made the mistake of listening to Life Left To Go by Safetysuit and it totally made me cry... Poor Sora...

Love this fanfic and I shall cherish reading it again forever.
tiff chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
cool story, I hope you can add a second chapter or something. Maybe about what the Organization tracking Axel and Roxas down.
zara2148 chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
*sniffles quietly*

G-good story!

*Breaks into a sob*
inactive account cries chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
This... I don't know how to describe it, but this was wonderful in a horrible, horrible way. The complete horrid unFAIRness of it... I didn't think anything could ever make me hate Roxas, but this did. And even so, you made him so realistic that I can't TRULY hate him. Just- wow. This is one of those fics that really makes you think about it, and FEEL.

I cried. I'm still crying and I'm not even reading it anymore, and I'm not afraid to admit it. This is one of the greatest fics I've ever read, and trust me when I say I don't just SAY things like that. You're an amazing writer.

~The Bad Nut
aznwhitekid chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
so sad :(
Versace Frolic chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
I started to hate Sora after awhile, some time after I learned what it meant to love Axel and to love Roxas, to love them together. It was strange to have gone from liking a character so much, smiling little Sora, to hating him for his idealism and indifference in the face of his Big Plans.

This is so sad, I don't even know what else to do than cry. I don't know what it is about martyrs or unsung heroes that assaults me the way it does, but it's so... fucked up. It's fucked up and unfair and so, so good.

Thank you for sharing.
hragaman chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
Kyaa! or maybe it's "gyaah!" But either way, that's - that's pretty cool! Totally and completely fangirl-ing worthy!
CeruleanNocturne chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Wow...this WAS pretty disturbing in a way, but I liked it cause I can just see Axel doing this to Sora. If it wasn't for the whole "this is a disney/children's game so nothing bad can happen to main character and he can't die" biased crap, maybe the game would have been a little darker and better! Ah well, enough of my ranting, either way, love this fanfic and very good job:D
Mirrankei chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
That was... so sad. D:

But it was really good. I love the way you write Axel.
GooglyMooglies chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Wait, so... he's about to turn back into sora?

This was beautifully done. I really enjoyed it. Heartless!Sora is so cute!
Hell's Jester chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
WAH!

You made me cry TTTT.

Poor Sora!

I love Roxas best, but still...

He killed him!

*Sniff* good story though.

Tearful luvs for you!
The Pterodactyl chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
Most impressive. I really like how you developed Sora as a Heartless, especially since Shadows are just throwaway enemies in the actual game. The idea of Axel having pseudo-conversations with one was...not quite funny, but more like one of those things that makes you tilt your head and go, "huh." Very interesting. Now I have to check out the rest of your stuff...

The Pterodactyl
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