Reviews for The Face in the Mirror
thousand-leaf chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
That was amazing. The separate sentences added to the heaviness and strange relationship between Michael and Sara; it's like each sentence doesn't make much sense, but they relate and work together in some way. Or...maybe not. I liked this anyway. Great job! ~ E. Mentry
twinklestar120 chapter 1 . 9/20/2006
So sweet! *sniff* Why has this not got more reviews? I loved it! Especially the disconnectedness of each little paragraph.

Oh and this line "She doesn’t associate soft with prison or tattoos; that’s why she gets a jolt each time her hands brush the skin of Michael’s arm."


Well done! I hope to read some more of your stuff.
xj chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
i thought that was one of the most original pieces of fic that i hav ever read, not the norm but thats what made it so much better...loved every bit of it, your're a real talent...