Reviews for The Unexpected
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
Poor tamiki hikaru and kouru haven't a clue what's going on
Book girl fan chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Please tell me there is a sequel to this.
LoveIsInfectious chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
This was magnificent! I just sort of wish you had continued it ; Ah, well. It was still a grand read either way.
fred the sheep chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
oooooooooooo somebody's in trouble LOL (i just love 'it's not what it looks like' sences there awesome)
lianieto chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
oh wow! hahahahaha that was hilarious! Great job! It sounded perfect! But Kyoya wouldve just mentioned the spot instead of actully cleaning it.
Jessie chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
CUTE! X3 will u PLZ make another 1!that was great i love the detail in it, it makes it really good! i think tho u should have gone a little bit futher in to explaining the kiss, you know what i mean? But still GREAT! 4.7/5
Ouran Girl chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
the twins play the 'Who is Hikaru game' not 'Guess who is the Hitachiin twins' game.

this was a good story, though you might wanna go through the grammer again.

the Kyoya x Haruhi are some of my fave couples put i like Mori x Haru better.
aNimEdArkU chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
continue it! but...if its complete already...cant u continue it...but if u can...please!
Sunruner chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
Really? Just a oneshot? O.o Seems a bit surprising; you ended it so abruptly!

Oh well, still Kyouya/Haruhi! (however unintentional) P

Lehst chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
haha! pretty good. this really shouldn't be a one-shot... make another chapter!
star chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
uh oh... LOL
TheHamsterInMyMind chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
This is cute... even if it does have an off-the-cliff ending. : )
Vitam Viva chapter 1 . 11/20/2006
damnit no! dont stop i want to see there reactions!
Cheska chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
Hahah, the ending was hilarious! OMG, what a way to catch the two of them. Hahaha, even if it is an accident!
Kiara Angel chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
omg this is so cute this just CANNOT be aoneshot! there has to be more! you are a great and come on therehas to be something more!
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