|Reviews for The Battousai's Return|
| darkryubaby chapter 5 . 11/3/2013
Good for you Koaru. I allays hated reading stories were Misao betrays Koaru and Kaoru forgives her. That's stupid and unrealistic. They're not even real friendly in the anime so I don't understand peoples need to keep them friendly. Even if Koaru joins them, I hope she never forgives her, cause to me, friendship is made up of pure trust. You can fuck up every now and then, but that type of betrayal makes you lower than the smallest speck of ant shit in the dirtiest place on earth.
| Fenris Jin chapter 2 . 4/16/2013
Oooh.. Very kinky. Cuffed to the bed. Tsk2.. A really interesting way to start a relationship..XD
Katsura was sort of disappointing.. He sounded like he wet his pants.
| Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
This is going to be a challenging start for Kenshin.. XD
| WeepingRain chapter 7 . 8/28/2011
This was good. I hope you finish it.
| Jasmine blossom625 chapter 7 . 4/19/2011
Another amazing fic that hasn't seen the light of day! You must update! (Please?) XD
| Crimsondeath chapter 7 . 12/29/2009
I've have just finished reading through what you have written for this story, and am very impressed. I like the depth of the characters and the slight twists that have been applied to the original. I hope to be able to read more of this story in the near future and wish you luck in continuing to write a well constructed and edited story.
| SRAS9 chapter 7 . 9/6/2009
Fantastic like all your other fanfics!
I'm very curious to know how the story will continue now because it seems as youhave just finished a part of the story and now we will enter in another part where Kaoru will no longer see her uncle as a "saint" and doubts and questions will surface.
Excelent work! Please update soon!
| rosewolf44 chapter 7 . 8/19/2009
aww that last bit was sweet
keep it up
| constant boredom chapter 7 . 8/13/2009
omg this was AWESOME! Amazing story! I just started reading chapter one a whie ago and couldn't stop reading! This has to be the most well written and suspenseful kenshin fic I've read so far X3 Please update soon! I can't wait to see what Kenshin does next!
| mo chapter 7 . 8/7/2009
this plot's really got me going!
i'm dying to see waht happens next
i'm thinking kaoru's gonna take it into her own hands and look for kenshin?
hehe i hope so!
update soon please :)
| Brukaoru chapter 7 . 3/25/2009
Good plot, good writing, very good story! Hope you continue it!
| tam chapter 2 . 12/11/2008
keep on writing
| omasuoniwabanshi chapter 7 . 12/2/2008
It still seems really odd to read Katsura as a remorseless villain. It's not really in-character for the Katsura of Watsuki's anime, but it does suit the purposes of the story.
Because he is a villain, I can't quite figure out if he's telling the truth about not knowing about the Shishio assassination until it was too late to stop it. I'll have to wait and see if the next chapter tells more.
Kaoru's so stuck on Kenshin! I could tell by the last paragraph. I have a feeling he's going to show up in her life again, which is all to the good.
| Shahrezad1 chapter 7 . 11/21/2008
SWEET! You updated! And what a wonderful update it is. D I quite enjoyed the chapter, and everything you wrote certainly explained a few things.
| J Luc Pitard chapter 7 . 11/18/2008
Interesting take on the kidnapping storyline. I like that Misao was culpable as well in this one. The hurt and future forgiveness in the main relationship as well as in her friendship is good.
Your version of Katsura is twisted... I like it. The drug may be a red herring and its use makes Katsura into quite a monster, so I like the response Kenshin has to it in flashback. He's less annoyed at being manipulated and more at having the memory of his victims blocked so he can't honor them or atone for their deaths. It's a very mature reaction for a teenager. One tiny question, when he says he'll stay until Toba Fushimi, but that was the name given to battles after the fact. "Until we crush the Bakufu" would've made more sense. Or "Until I'm sure of the success of the Revolution" or some such. He could also stipulate that no drugs ever be used again? It seemed to be missing from the end of that scene.
Looking forward to how Sano, Saito et al get involved once Kaoru is back. Also, curious to see if Katsura knew the driver was listening? Perhaps he's part of Shishio's revenge? Just a thought...