|Reviews for Instruction In Youth|
| CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
while proverbs are good i do not believe attempting to teach them all in one day is a good idea, especially when many require a complexity of experience not found in a 12-13 yr old, even a well brought up and smart 12-13 yr old. Ultimately, this one was not amusing in the slightest (not sure why thats even the genre?). So, yay, nice try but I didn't like this one.
| shine lots chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
i like it
| yamina-chan chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Why, that last one seems to work for an other friendship just as well -
It was fun to read this story and I belive the readers learned something as well XD
| Emily chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
HA! My Dad does the very same thing Legolas does: if I don't get up, he flips my mattress. It's very annoying. I can empathize with Estel. : )
Good story; I can't believe Elrond made them go into the library and study all those proverbs Legolas just spent a whole day quoting to Estel! : )
| Virodeil chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Hee... I love your funny end notes. :)
I love how you put the proverbs into place too. I wish I knew as much proverbs to make it worth a one-shot. But well. *shrug* The story was interesting; but I wonder, why did the journey home was more chaotic than the way going to the river? LOL ;D
The ending was hilarious - in a way! Two proverbs from Elrond! Woot! And the closure was a proverb too! It's cool to me.
| Under.a.floorboard.world chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Very funny. One of the few Legolas-including fics that actually manage to make him sound like the cannon Legolas without missing the opportunity to make a fun story out of it!
And the Estel-Legolas-Elrond interaction was great :P Plus, the proverbs were very fitting, too. Great job!
| flyfloyd chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
hehehe, seems like estel finally had a small amount of fun in his lessons
don't let the spider eat me! D: I have arachnophobia! *cowers in corner*
| sazza-da-vampire chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
| Dizzles the Dizzy chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
I thought this was rather amusing!
That took me sixty six seconds! haha!
| iko chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
I love it... it's simply amazing and so cute :)
| fan chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
I am witing this for fear of being fed to spider. I like the way that unlike many other writers (who frustrate me greatly)you portray Legolas as wise instead of a bimbo. Big Fan KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
| Mirime93 chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Aww...] I liked that. Humorous and cute, proverbs were awesome too and loved the ending *hugs!*
| lotrelves chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
Ha. That was funny. I'm going to read your next great story.
| Wimsey1 chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
This is offically my favorite. I love the way you write Legolas. The proverbs are very well done and add so much to the story. I am replete!
| Calenmarwen chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
This one was full of humour. I loved it!