| Reviews for Inner Light |
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   tsuki akina chapter 1 . 2/19/2007 I'm disappointed that I didn't review this before. Good job! |
| alliwant chapter 1 . 1/17/2007 omg! love it! i read this so many times, but i never understood it, but i liked it anyway, but know...i finally get it! the whole symbolism thing! it mite be because i always skim, this time i read each word, and the whole inner light and how sakura made a wish! it was AWESOME! just like all ur other stories! ) |
| Neopuff chapter 1 . 1/1/2007 i liked this one it was nice pretty and always kyute! |
| Aikiko-Ashra chapter 1 . 10/15/2006 Wow! That was a really good story! I like how you put it in Sakura's point of view. The story made sense and it seemed very real; how Neji and Tenten would have to hide their love. Great job! This was amazing! |
| lildaemon chapter 1 . 10/14/2006 an outsider's perspective was a VERY smart choice! added a nice touch. awesome job! |
| Houtori chapter 1 . 10/11/2006 Aw... that was touching, it really was. Well-written Sakura's POV fic. |
| Yami Umi chapter 1 . 10/11/2006 You know, I know I have already thanked you, but this time I would like to compliment you too, because certain things are priceless. This site is a sucess all over the world of fiction because of authors like you writing stories like this one, so please be proud. I guess that's the best thing I can say to you without it sounding like a lie. |
| VirtualxSimplicity chapter 1 . 10/6/2006 Lovely. Absolutely original and meaningful. VxS |
| angelgrl chapter 1 . 9/25/2006 loved it. the inner light, and everything. brilliant. |
| V-chan2k6 chapter 1 . 9/21/2006 Oh, my. This oneshot gave me giant-sparkly-fangirl-eyes about halfway through, and they stayed there until the last word. This was very well-written and well-formatted; it flowed together really well, and just felt comfortable and natural to read. It's oneshots like these that turn me into a hopeless romantic for a few minutes at a time, and this one was very effective in that area. ~_~ All in all, a beautiful oneshot. |
| Tanya Lilac chapter 1 . 9/15/2006 I liked the perspective of the story- it's i think the first one i've read like it, and it was done really well. The fact that there's nothing... stilted about it- Sakura is not pining for Neji or something ridiculous like that, and it's not cute and fluffy (although in some respects it is). The metaphor is very symbolic, i think- and fitting for their kind of relationship; a secret that they need to cherish in the time that they have. It was very well characterised; i loved the wonderful imagery, it was descriptive without rambling- which i'm pretty sure i'm doing. Anyhow, to the point- i really like what you've done with the concept, and i congratulate you on doing a fantastic job with it! *Kat |
| Falconfire chapter 1 . 9/13/2006 Sweet. Nessie, you have done it again. Good job! But, the implication that they may not end up together, while true, is too sad to think about. D: |
| nothing but blue chapter 1 . 9/12/2006 that was AWESOME! write more! more! lol. jk jk, i love your writing, but it must be hard with school and stuff. you're doing great! good job! :D |
| doeHEARTED chapter 1 . 9/11/2006 SO GOOD! I havent reviewed in awhile and this is just the kind of story i love to review1 |
| tomboy901 chapter 1 . 9/10/2006 Wow, greatly written! :D |