Oh man where to begin... I just hope this continues all that way to where the Naruto story is now this is so good if I could I'd pay you too keep going and one day with your help turn into another anime version of Naruto you are doing so we I hope you continue

I still hate the rape-y aspects of unity and all the seals on a personal level. It definitely adds to the overall dark tone and theme of the story, so kudos about that. The way you portrayed seals is really interesting in this story since it expands upon them so much. To bad you didn't have the knowledge about the Uzumaki clan when you started this or you could've worked that in a lot more. I've read all of shinobi war, but I really hope that it wasn't in the plans to have danzo be alive and for him to also have control over anko. I really hate the idea of Anko being controlled at all. Anyways kudos.

This reminds me of how when I first watched the massacre flashback from part 1, I wondered if Itachi hated something so fiercely to get that strong or if he was just a psychopath. The reveal in shippuden was... meh. Kinda neat but overshadowed by the fact that it didn't make much sense

Damn, that last bit is some heavy foreshadowing

And the father of sakura would never abuse his mother... and Naruto would not say the word 'fuckin' before talking of his family who he respect...

Awesome

This Naruto is annoying to read, not because of his charecter but the "Oi!". I mean his each sentence start with "Oi!" You don't always say "Hey!" whenever you talk to someone he could simply say the name like "Ero-Sanin/Anko/Ino". Otherwise intresting read

Then ending of this chapter... Wheeeeeww
Well done

Kurenai You will Not Talk to the Hokage or we'll have a problem you see...

yunno… oddly enough, i ship sakura and kiba. o.o i have no idea where it came from.

uhm…. isn’t it sarutobi hiruzen? ._. sarutobi sasuke would be his dad, i think. the professor or whatever.

and i am just as mad as the first time i read ino and sasuke’s fight. my hatred of him is even more potent than before because of this chapter. i’ll always not like the dude.

yunno, i can’t wait until shino just finally loses it and yells at them to stfu. i think he did at one point? or was it another fic? i can’t be sure, but at least an outspoken shino would be badass with their team. especially with how close they would become. just strike a pose along with the other two.

hi, second time reading this, so i can catch myself up in order to read the sequel. but if his last name is uzumaki, wouldn’t that automatically tell them that it could only be the only uzumaki that was in the village at that time? then again, i have no idea when this was being written, but the uzumaki was also revered which explains the spirals on every jounin/chuunin jacket. i mean, is not like there was more than one in the village before naruto’s birth.

I wanted to like this, but within the second chapter the author goes from making Naurto have a new background to a roughly similar one. So, thst in effect the villagers are the same to him.

If Naruto doesn't know about "his dark secret", then it's not his secret.