|Reviews for Naruto: Altered History|
| Vanessa Masters chapter 23 . 11/23/2016
Poor Itachi, having to make such choices. And those Uchiha clan members, being all plotty.
And wanting to get Ino out of the picture, so to lure Naruto into the clan!
Loving the training scenes with Naruto and Jiraiya :D
Poor Ino, so in denial.
| Vanessa Masters chapter 2 . 11/23/2016
Awwww~ that last bit between Iruka and Naruto :)
Hehehehe. naruto peeing on the guy.
Hinata and Choji? There's one I never expected, but sure. :D
He's a sweet, wonderful guy. :)
| OllyOllyOxycodone chapter 8 . 10/30/2016
My desire to read this was gone as soon as you gave Naruto to another team. Guess you didn't have the creativity necessary for the chunin exam part without asspulling him a team.
It was pretty good while it lasted at least.
| CookieMonsta1233 chapter 15 . 9/26/2016
"Naruto suggested something, Ino would do the exact same thing"
I think this should be "Ino would do the exact opposite"
Also you misspelt soldier several times as 'solider'
| Redery chapter 32 . 9/24/2016
That was quite good, worth they read. Thanks for writing and sharing it! Sadly just noticed you never finished the sequel. Is it still ongoing?
| Redery chapter 31 . 9/24/2016
Forgot to say this earlier, but Kakashi seriously needs to kill Danzo, asap. There is absolutely NO reason why he wouldn't, other than further drama. Keeping Root active is not a good enough excuse when Danzo is using them to overthrow the village. The village comes first, not some out of control black ops group. Kakashi's whole moto about abandoning friends bieng worse than trash and what not would demand he kills him on the spot of finding out. Danzo's unity stright out attacked the village and got several people killed, including injuring the Third, even if he was gonna die soon. The only time Danzo should be by Kakashi's side is when when Kakashi thrusts a chidori down his throat.
On to the actual chapter. Looks like Yuugito might just become an ally after all. Never made sense why a village out outcast their sentient weapon. If you want a weapon to not strike it's own, you should take care of it lol.
Iruka would make a good father imo lol.
So Kakashi is planning his assassination at least. Still, would be much safer and effiecent to just call him to the office, stick a chidori in him, and have tenzo lead an assault on the root bases and wipe them out.
| Redery chapter 30 . 9/24/2016
Awesome chapter. Not sure why Jiraya didn't just kill her though if he wanted the secret to remain a secret. Not like Kumo wouldn't have their own ways of breaking memory seals, or the chance that it wouldn't work properly on a jinchuriki anyway. Then nartuo could've still gotten credit, a butt load of it for taking out Kumo's jinchuriki.
Was, a really awesome fight though, a true fight between jinchurikis, don't think the one with Gaara counts as that since he mostly just let the demon run wild rather than using it's power to augment his own like the chakra cloaks do.
Ino did awesome, hope she gets to keep that awesome lightning sword. Cliche, but awesome.
| Redery chapter 29 . 9/24/2016
Was a nice mission, finally something actually ninja like lol. Even cooler that you brought in Yugito, though hope he doesn't end up killing her, she can be a valuable ally against the Akatsuki.
Have to admit, I skipped the fortune telling part. Personally, horscopes and all that crap disgusts me.
Poor Anko lol, she's too used to Naruto's inhuman stamina.
Ah, so there is a sequel to this, was wondering how you meant to wrap up everything in a couple more chapters
| Redery chapter 28 . 9/24/2016
That was an awesome as hell chapter!
And hardly uncreative was quite smart leaving zabuza out until now and getting to see naruto own him. Wonder how badly he would've come out of them fight without Shinos help. Ino did pretty awesome too.
| Redery chapter 27 . 9/23/2016
This guy seems better than Z-san!
| Redery chapter 26 . 9/23/2016
Nice chapter, very somber.
| Redery chapter 25 . 9/23/2016
Nice chapter and awesome fight, was worth the wait.
| Redery chapter 24 . 9/23/2016
Hope the chick that was supposed to attract Naruto didn't die at least.
| Redery chapter 23 . 9/23/2016
There things about your dialog that have really been bugging me throughout.
1. Iunno is not a word. It's I dunno.
2. Ino sounds like an idiotic bimbo saying like every other word.
3. Oi is something used to get someone's attention, not something for naruto to start every sentence with.
I was about to be really really pissed that you made Itachi into a bad guy, killing for no reason, but then realized this was published before that came out lol.
Overall, decent chapter.
| Redery chapter 22 . 9/23/2016
Are you kidding me? Hashirama would've whooped Minato's ass 3 ways to sunday. Hell he was more powerful than naruto and sasuke combined at the end of the story. He took on Madara and the 9 tails in Susano form alone and won. He was called the Kami of Shinobi for a reason. Dude founded an era, Minato killed a few hundred Shinobi single handedly. Hashirama could've done that too if he wanted.
Not that Minato's weak, he's pretty awesome too, probably the second strongest Hokage. But Hashirma was head and shoulders above.
It's cool she's related to him, but don't have her start using Mokuton. She doesn't have the chakara for that.
Nice finally he learns about the Kyubbi.
Ooh interesting plots at the end. He really should've just killed Noga