Reviews for Naruto: Altered History
Redery chapter 30 . 9/24/2016
Awesome chapter. Not sure why Jiraya didn't just kill her though if he wanted the secret to remain a secret. Not like Kumo wouldn't have their own ways of breaking memory seals, or the chance that it wouldn't work properly on a jinchuriki anyway. Then nartuo could've still gotten credit, a butt load of it for taking out Kumo's jinchuriki.

Was, a really awesome fight though, a true fight between jinchurikis, don't think the one with Gaara counts as that since he mostly just let the demon run wild rather than using it's power to augment his own like the chakra cloaks do.

Ino did awesome, hope she gets to keep that awesome lightning sword. Cliche, but awesome.
Redery chapter 29 . 9/24/2016
Awesome chapter!
Was a nice mission, finally something actually ninja like lol. Even cooler that you brought in Yugito, though hope he doesn't end up killing her, she can be a valuable ally against the Akatsuki.
Have to admit, I skipped the fortune telling part. Personally, horscopes and all that crap disgusts me.
Poor Anko lol, she's too used to Naruto's inhuman stamina.
Ah, so there is a sequel to this, was wondering how you meant to wrap up everything in a couple more chapters
Redery chapter 28 . 9/24/2016
That was an awesome as hell chapter!
And hardly uncreative was quite smart leaving zabuza out until now and getting to see naruto own him. Wonder how badly he would've come out of them fight without Shinos help. Ino did pretty awesome too.
Redery chapter 27 . 9/23/2016
Awesome fight!
This guy seems better than Z-san!
Redery chapter 26 . 9/23/2016
Nice chapter, very somber.
Redery chapter 25 . 9/23/2016
Nice chapter and awesome fight, was worth the wait.
Redery chapter 24 . 9/23/2016
Hope the chick that was supposed to attract Naruto didn't die at least.
Redery chapter 23 . 9/23/2016
There things about your dialog that have really been bugging me throughout.
1. Iunno is not a word. It's I dunno.
2. Ino sounds like an idiotic bimbo saying like every other word.
3. Oi is something used to get someone's attention, not something for naruto to start every sentence with.

I was about to be really really pissed that you made Itachi into a bad guy, killing for no reason, but then realized this was published before that came out lol.

Overall, decent chapter.
Redery chapter 22 . 9/23/2016
Are you kidding me? Hashirama would've whooped Minato's ass 3 ways to sunday. Hell he was more powerful than naruto and sasuke combined at the end of the story. He took on Madara and the 9 tails in Susano form alone and won. He was called the Kami of Shinobi for a reason. Dude founded an era, Minato killed a few hundred Shinobi single handedly. Hashirama could've done that too if he wanted.
Not that Minato's weak, he's pretty awesome too, probably the second strongest Hokage. But Hashirma was head and shoulders above.

It's cool she's related to him, but don't have her start using Mokuton. She doesn't have the chakara for that.

Nice finally he learns about the Kyubbi.

Ooh interesting plots at the end. He really should've just killed Noga
Redery chapter 21 . 9/23/2016
Best chapter so far imho.
Awesome fight, especially how Naruto beat Gaara with his own prowess and not relaying on the massive boost of the Kyubbi. That's just epic.
And really liked the ending with the legend bit.
Redery chapter 20 . 9/23/2016
Nice matches. Especially the one with Lee, though I think Naruto would've lost or seriously hurt if Lee had taken off his weights.
Ah man was soo looking forward to seeing Sasuke get his ass whooped. Loled so hard when Naruto did the 1000 years of pain on him lol.
But this should be interesting at least.
Redery chapter 19 . 9/23/2016
Always found it really creepy naruto using the jutsu on Jiraiya.

Awesome chapter though, nice training montage. Looks like the seal on him came in handy to get better control at least. Makes sense he didn;t get a summoning for the toads, just hope he gets one for the snakes at least or that would suck.
Redery chapter 18 . 9/23/2016
Awesome chapter. So Sasuke did get marked after all. Wonder why Orochi went after him if there are more Uchiha's alive in this AU. Sad there's no prelims, but should make the finals even better. No way Ino's gonna lose to Sakura this time with her extra training.
Redery chapter 17 . 9/23/2016
Lol nice change in the exams, but that would mean Gaara would kill literally everyone.
Anko taught naruto to kill as efficiently as possible. not to make his target suffer, I think slicing his wrist instead of his throat is completely OC for him.
Poor Hayate. Interesting Orochi is part of Akatasuki. Wonder where his partner is.
Redery chapter 16 . 9/23/2016
Nice test.
Please use your and you're properly though.
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