|Reviews for Finding Avalon|
| LoneWolf1968 chapter 18 . 3/23
I'll be waiting for the updates.
| i like cheese chapter 11 . 2/8
top secret or operational security really have no meaning for the sg-forces in this fic, do they?
i think i'll probably stop reading this. it's just really hard to believing some of the non-action parts of this story.
| i like cheese chapter 8 . 2/8
well, you were going strong, right up until chapter 7, where stuff started rattling, and chapter 8 was just kind of shit.
why? well, let's start with the rather insipid banter between sg forces and colonials in a combat situation. then, of course, you've got them starting to spill classified secrets left, right, and center. also, why the hell, would rodney be on a rescue mission? and even he would know better than to start explaining top secret cloaking tech or even rudimentary ata-gene requirements for ancient tech.
also, the whole decision to intervene in cylon-colonial affairs was reached fairly arbitrary and with little to no regard for what it would mean for consequences concerning earth. not even a discussion about it. (it's actually something about stargate that i absolutely despise, the whole uninformed eearth population)
still, i hope you can salvage this, but at this point i'm not holding my breath.
i appreciate the effort it took to write the story though.
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/27
Yay remf got his ass kicked, please update as soon as you can.
| Guest chapter 17 . 1/27
Haha Fifth can suck it! XD
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/27
It great how many people were willing to be apart of the rescue.
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/27
Major wake the hell up and kill Bill!
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/27
Someone just kill that dick.
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/27
A defining moment in history for these people.
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/27
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/27
Fraking awesome chapter!
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/27
Now comes the hard part.
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/27
Another superb chapter.
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/27
Oh that was so good!
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/27
I love that you are going to incorporate all the shows and the way they twist together. We are getting to BSG yay.