Reviews for Locked Togeather
Brucas46Forever chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
its a good plot, i think u jumped into it too quickly though

it wud have been nice if u elaborated on the characters more

and built some stable ground first before u locked em both in there

but its alright

maybe u can make the next chapter longer

update soon :)

if u ever need any help or suggestions feel free to ask
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