Reviews for Parallels |
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![]() ![]() ![]() 2nd time through, as good as the 1st ! |
![]() ![]() Where’s Neville and Luna? |
![]() ![]() I know you have been gone for a few years now (RIP) but I like to believe you are somewhere up high looking down and keeping on eye on your stories, the readers and your reviews. If so this is the third time I have read this and like all your other stories it has given me many moments of pleasure. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was great that Harry found a family in the new place. A good read when in need of a super-powered Harry. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. Keep writing as life allows |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! I only have one issue: not enough Sirius! It looks like they’re not interested in any bonding time. |
![]() ![]() Sorry to hear of your diagnosis. I will be praying for you and your family. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was well written and an interesting plot! I'd suggest breaking it down into multiple chapters. You've already done that visually, but I kept dreading my phone doing its typical thing and making me reload a page. It oddly didn't happen! That was fortunate, but I was anxious about it and kept trying to remember where I was to find it again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I kinda enjoyed some aspects but its just ridiculous |
![]() ![]() ![]() Que paso con Lucius . Gran historia. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great read. Thank you. If i could write as well as you, I would tell you all the bits I enjoyed. His power and skills but still needing healing, who was good and who wasn’t too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely wonderful! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed your story. |
![]() ![]() This is pretty bad. Op harry yet just let's shit happen so he can come in and save the day and pass out at the end. They bad guys are a few iq points from mentally retarded. |