Reviews for Rules of the Game
HJP ROX chapter 38 . 5/7
please update plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz this is so good and the worst cliffhanger everrrr
teethforteeth chapter 38 . 2/28
i love this story so much but please i know its been nearly 13 years but i need closure
BD7217 chapter 16 . 11/1/2022
That joke about Mr. Butts was good, my own last name is Buts btw.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 6 . 9/7/2022
Dumbledore is hella OC. He wouldn’t tell Harry to hand over his wand. And it isn’t dangerous. It just can hurt Voldemort while uses his brother wand. Like wtf? And Seamus being OOC is fricking annoying. Make it Draco. Jeez. Where’s Hermione?
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 5 . 9/7/2022
I don’t like that Seamus is rude. I like Percy here. H3 better not turn into a jerk.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 4 . 9/7/2022
How the hell did Ron nit make the connection that the new kid was Harry Potter? Everyone knows he’s in their year and there’s only one Harry!
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 3 . 9/7/2022
Harry doesn’t even have his wand yet. He better get Hedwig! Also, whoever went to the Dursley’s definitely would’ve realized that they were kyung about Harry running away.
William chapter 12 . 7/2/2022
This is one of the best fics I have ever read!
Keep up the good work.
shah927 chapter 38 . 1/26/2022
Love this story, the much more realistic 11 year olds, Sirius's attitude at the end, and more
Just binge-read the whole thing! Following just in case you update anytime.
PEACHESandBUNNY 17 chapter 37 . 10/31/2021
I loved reading what you have written so far. I hope that you will update again soon because I would love to read more and see where the story goes from here (chapter 38)
jasnrob chapter 20 . 10/12/2021
Love the kids wanting Harry to be safe and well.
PEACHESandBUNNY 17 chapter 38 . 5/17/2021
I hope you update again, I rly want to see when this goes from here and what happens. Please update again I love the story so far
Grammar Fiend chapter 5 . 3/7/2021
You have some truly excellent ideas and some unique plot twists that I am really enjoying. However, your English skills need some strict attention. One cat: cat. More than one cat: cats (NOT cat's). One Potter: Potter. More than one Potter: Potters (NOT Potter's). There are NO apostrophes in pluralizations. This is Primary School English you need to review. Belonging to one Potter: Potter's. Belonging to more than one Potter: Potters' (or Potters's). The possessive requires an apostrophe (with a few exceptions: his, hers, ours, theirs).

Gryffindors, stairs, teachers, ideas: all plural, no apostrophes. Sometimes, in English, we change the word itself to make the plural: mice, men, wives, children, stories. Some words are also their own plurals: moose, fish. Cat’s paw, ministry’s policy (one policy of one ministry), ministries’ policies (more than one policy of more than one ministry), night’s sleep, harm’s way, Potters’ fortune: all possessive, all require an apostrophe.

Keep writing! You can greatly improve your readability by paying more attention to every word you type.

Thank you for your contribution to the world of Harry Potter Fan Fiction.
fantasystar78 chapter 38 . 1/9/2021
A very suspenseful way to end!
fantasystar78 chapter 15 . 1/9/2021
Don’t wizards immediately repair broken arms? Why is no e questioning this?
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