|Reviews for Lips Of An Angel|
| hary's princess chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
I LOVE THAT SONG SO MUCH AND JEFF HARDY 2 !
| Pinayprincesa chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
Aw so Sweet!
| Smark Me chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
Read the guidelines. Plainly stated under actions not allowed:
'Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.'
It's possible to still write a fic based on the song that doesn't include the song lyrics. I would suggest rewriting this by ommitting the lyrics as they are in direct violation of the rules, and it would be good to proofread your work too, there are a lot of punctuation and other grammatical errors.
Plot-wise this was confusing. I love the song and it was a straight up song about a man phoning his girl on the side while his legitimate girlfriend is in the other room. This story goes a little off tangent and into the 'what?' territory. It would be good if you cleared that up.
| buffvamp chapter 1 . 9/12/2006
I liked it. The ending was good.