Reviews for The Flower
MuggleCreator chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Aww. If only it had happened that way in real!
Aranel Mirfain chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
So sweet! Aw i wish there were more little Obi stories!
Ocne chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Oh, nice story! I particularly liked Qui-Gon's vision and, afterwards, the flower disappearing in the current. Beautiful.

Thank you for sharing.
Olivia94 chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
How is it that I like everything you write? Oh well, this is fantastic. It made me happy. :) Great job!
CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
awww..especially liked the part where the force shunned jinn. as wel as the flower symbolism
zafaran chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
Oh, that is so sweet. Nicely done. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters on more stories sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
SwordMasterZ chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Nice you know I could see this as what happend
Shyma Tavrott Lupin chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
aw that was so sweet, im crying T-T
Animekitty47 chapter 1 . 2/18/2008

Cute lil story! XD
Sexy Scottish Accent chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
Aww...that's so sweet! I liked the plot, but the wording and some of the grammar drove me crazy. I'm kinda OCD when it comes to that stuff.
iMelinda chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
Very good. I can somehow tell it was your first story. It was a good way of Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon meeting each other
Matteic chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
It's so cute !
Kelev chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
Cute story. Though I know that Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan don't really meet this way it was a rather interesting little fic.
TnTornado chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
wow, this was a awesome touching story, loved all of it.

Great great job.

Random Stuff About Stuff chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
Ha! Cute. I loved how Obi-Wan seemed to know what would help him, before anyone else did.

Only one problem I noticed was that you put quotation marks surrounding every spoken sentence. Quotes are only supposed to go around every part that someone's speaking. So long as the person's still talking, quotation marks shouldn't stop for any other punctuation.

Other than that it was brillant. Loved it!
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