Reviews for Colourless Vanity
TheOtterKnight chapter 17 . 10/16/2023
Nooooooo
Last chapter. :(

This was actually the part I remember most, other than Itachi's uniform change at the start and Naruto's reaction to him. Naruto getting praised for his henge and the comparison to Kushina has stayed rooted in my mind. Giving Naruto a natural ability in technique creation is so brilliant.

This was such an enjoyable read. I'll cherish it forever.
TheOtterKnight chapter 15 . 10/16/2023
Kei's speech last chapter nudged the "huh" train but I didn't expect this plot twist. What he did go Hyoo was unexpected, I was gobsmacked.

Really love how you went this route though.

Naruto's imagine of older Sakura was kind of funny haha. Can't wait to finish the next two chapters.
TheOtterKnight chapter 14 . 10/16/2023
Ughhh teacher Sasuke is going to dominate my mind, I just know it.

I actually expected Kei to be a ghost instead of a spy but that tracks. Guess the Akatsuki know that Itachi is back, I guess. :')

I wish I wasn't nearing the end of uploaded chapters. I'm loving this fic so far. I read part of it once years ago and it still holds up. Definitely one of my favourite ANBU Naruto stories.

I love Naruto's development too, how he's gradually getting stronger. It's good that he's found a family within the ANBU and that they're actually working on getting him stronger.
Guest chapter 17 . 8/28/2023
I loved this story - how much detail you put in, the build of the characters, Naruto's change... I really wish you had continued it. I'm adding it to my bookmarks even just for the smallest hope that one day inspiration will strike and you'll come back to it.
Jaye chapter 1 . 8/9/2022
I couldn’t even finish the 1st chapter. Too much internal thinking and meaningless lengthy descriptions of unimportant things. Not even conversation. I can see how this story became so many words and that’s bcuz you added all that useless descriptive information. I dread to read the other chapters so I’m not. I hate stories like this… FYI, just bcuz it’s a long story doesn’t mean it was written well.
EtheriousLogia chapter 17 . 10/23/2021
plz dont be dead, story is too good and wholesome
Ohhbabygirl chapter 1 . 3/4/2021
update?
Adelyn123 chapter 17 . 2/15/2021
This book is awesome, i really hope you keep it going and we some more updates, the chapters are nice and the suspense of the things yet to happen to awesome and intense, the development between Itachi and Naruto mught be real slow but this is still an awesone book.

Please more.
montyblack101 chapter 17 . 2/11/2021
Why did I just get invested in a story that hasnt been update in 10 years. Such a shame to, it's so well written, and the plot so far is great.
Painful chapter 4 . 2/8/2021
Holy shit this went down turd creek without a paddle haha. Uchiha Itachi as Death Wings hahahahahahaha
Nozomi Akiyama chapter 17 . 7/15/2020
Thanks~
munchin munchkin chapter 17 . 4/5/2020
Love this story and I hope you come to it someday soon!
PowerofBooks chapter 17 . 4/1/2020
This is an amazing story, with just the right amount of cannon and not to make the story come alive. The way the characters are written are well done and the oc's fit in well. The structure is well done. I would hope for updates on this but, since it seems to not be updated in a long while I can only hope that this story is looked at and updated again. With your ability to write I'll say that you should probably write your own book and I'll love to read it. If it's possible please update. Are you gonna have Naruto as a seal master? Is he going to have any bloodlines? When is Itachi and Naruto going to get together? I am enjoying this story and hopefully this will be updated.
sora1shiro chapter 17 . 12/29/2019
I really like the in-depth explanations you give and the plot development is AMAZING. If you haven't abandoned this fic after all this time, I'll be hoping for an update!
DarknekoKurai chapter 17 . 12/28/2019
I know this has not been updated in forever but even if you never touch this story again. I hope you know how much i enjoyed it. I love how you was going about this. I really enjoyed this. Even though i was reading your stories years ago when this was first written. Being older how i can really enjoyed how much thought and work went into this and thank you so much for sharing.
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