Reviews for Colourless Vanity |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh fuck better hip hop genocide that bitch itachi he's hurting your man |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was brilliant, I loved it so much. The portrayal of each character was awesome. I loved how you did Itachi and Naruto especially, most fics don't do either of those characters justice. You're writing style was great to, I didn't get bored at all, even though there wasn't an action overload. I'm guessing it will never be updated, that's such a shame. I'm off to check out some of your other stories, thanks for the great read! Best wishes, Naruto Meowzers |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. It's just awesome. I am speechless |
![]() ![]() Dear author: LOVE. And sad. That it hasn’t been updated. This is such a well paced story. I thought it would jump to the romance immediately. But it didn’t and we readers get to know naruto more. Bravo. We need more authors like you on this site. Are you an actual author? |
![]() ![]() ![]() More pls this is what i was looking for. Pls more |
![]() ![]() I love this story so much! It’s wonderful! Please don’t give up on it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() alittle more talking and alittle less thinking please this id boring |
![]() ![]() It's been over 6 years since this story has been updated...and yet from time to time I find myself looking for this story, just to lose myself in the world you created with Naruto. It's sad that this masterpiece has been left unfinished. I hope that one day you will return, until then I will just have to use my imagination for my own ending. Though I'm sure yours was better lol Drop me a line if you ever update, my email is |
![]() ![]() Please do you plan to update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg i absolutely love this story! it's so sweet and beautiful! I love how much naruto developed since joining anbu! it's really like a little family! and leave it to gaara to find naruto on the spot while Sakurai is clueless ;D I really really hope you'll continue this because it's one of my new favorites |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a shame that this fic hasn't been updated in a while. Hopefully in the future you'll maybe come back to it. I'm really looking forward to what will happen next. |
![]() ![]() aaaaa this story is wonderful! i love love love focusing on naruto's strengths that he may not realize he has- focusing on his grasp of the technicalities behind handseals- so cool! the characterization in this makes me so happy! spot on! the flow of this whole story has such good pacing, and I love all the thought amd detail worked into this! I feel like you might be teaching me more of the technicalities in naruto than the series did haha! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hope you come back and finish one day |
![]() ![]() I really would love for this story to continue... its really well written and interesting |
![]() ![]() I loved it a lot. I loved reading each and every part of it. I especially loved how you are not rushing through the story and explaining everything in detail, plus your english and grammar is pretty amazing. I literally read this in one sitting, thats how much I loved this story. So please do think about updating it... |