I wish that one of the last three plots had happened. Poor guy. :(

I wish this had happened. Poor guy just needs some love.

Ohhh... Poor guy. If only this really had happened instead.

Love this, but Eric Lensher is a false name...His name is Max Eisenhardt.

Superb work on this.

These stories are beautiful.

Very good description of the CIA's collaboration with the Nazis.

Hi. I found your story through the Charlie's Angels C2. Overall, I thought it showed wonderful insight into the character. You came up with some really original but totally logical AUs. I thought Chapter 4, however, was slightly weaker than the other four. Maybe I just don't find the how Isabelle incident as interesting a part of Erik's life.

I also liked how you ended both the first and the last chapter with Magneto (re)claiming his name. Perhaps a slight jab at Marvel for constantly re-writing Magneto's history?

Beautiful quiet little stories that make you wonder what the world would be like if they had happened. Love the fifth one the best - his interaction with his kids and their foster parents. Wonderful, but of course that's to be expected with anything you write.

kiragecko

I loved the positive twist each one of these tragic stories contained, and how Erik realizes his potential for love instead of becoming Magneto. I found chapters two and three especially touching.

So many chances to change a life brighter and more joyful.

You are gifted.

Having Anya would have made all the difference to Erik, instead of being a mutant supremists and terrorist- a father and Zionist.

It works :)

You are gifted with words of true passion and sorrow.

Dark and bloody brillant.

My Great Grandfather lost his eye in the holocaust, and many of my famliy lost alot more. What they saw in those camps were things that could never be spoken, but it was always on their breath.