Reviews for Paddy's Little Pup
Books85 chapter 15 . 2/22/2017
I haveread this before ; when Nrs. Neeley made her appearance I remembered her fondly . I apologize for not having reviewed earlier . Your poetry for the ceremony was far better than most fanfiction poetry . I can imagine it bring used to help blend families together . Just lovely.

Thank you.

I hope that you have the little one shot story where Sirius contacts Mrs. Neeley to reassure her that Harry is okay still on your psge. That also was lovely.
alxe.m chapter 12 . 2/2/2017
I like the story but feel that what ever the muggle who sirius falls in love witth could hve been seen before hand as i feel was was just a bit odd and it mades me kind of dislike her. but over all i like it
Guest chapter 24 . 1/18/2017
Ooooooo
Eric chapter 24 . 1/14/2017
Well, It seems that there might be (about) two more chapters here. one to finish off the explaination and the horcruxes and one to finish off V?
Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2016
So so good!
Guest chapter 24 . 10/29/2016
This is a great story, and I look forward to reading it in the future. I am sorry for your loss and want to thank you for spending the time to write this wonderful fanfic. Please update as soon as you can. I can't wait!
queen-of-the-libary-and-light chapter 3 . 10/29/2016
Hi I really love this story.. my only problem is the American terminology used throughout it even though it's set in the UK. . It is extremely distracting to see words like kindergarten (in the UK it's primary school) and we don't have things like pre school, we have nursery school.. (These are only a couple if examples.. ) ask said, I love this story, my only problem is the terminology used
Guest chapter 24 . 10/27/2016
Nooooo it can't stop here, I'm to invested in this for it to not be finished
slytherinsal chapter 9 . 10/8/2016
I expect people have mentioned the wrong prison garb and odd courtroom techniques for Britain. But then we have the advantage on you guys because we know about American customs by watching Perry Mason and Columbo and so on, so not fair to criticise. I don't suppose things like Morse and Kavanagh QC made it across the pond.
slytherinsal chapter 5 . 10/8/2016
You have all my thoughts and sympathy. Losing a child is every mother's nightmare. One of my best friends lost her only child, a daughter, at a similar age, and I know a bit about the hell she has gone through.
slytherinsal chapter 4 . 10/8/2016
Not strange at all, similar to my own reading at the same age. And my son's for that matter. He was on Lord of the Rings at 8. hehe I was thinking that Harry was normal and Dudley just very very backward.
emily88034 chapter 2 . 10/5/2016
I really like your story except for the fact that both Harry and Dudley seem developmentally much more like 5 or 6 year olds than 3 or 4 year olds
dragon606 chapter 24 . 9/23/2016
Enjoyed the story even if isn't finished
Guest chapter 24 . 9/11/2016
Oh no I thought this. Was s completed story booo
Comrade'sRoza chapter 24 . 9/7/2016
Brilliant! Please continue.
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