Reviews for Savin' Me
WarriorQueen124 chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
That was so adorable! I loved it, and for a moment, I did think you were a cruel author for ending it there.

So great job and keep writing!
cast14 chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
great story i loved it
PsYcHoWoLfIe chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
aww...i'm crying again make the story sad then u make it happy...great job momma fox!
Cassie Studios chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
Yay! How nice! :)

A really good one, save the Itachwoman thing (OOC...). I liked the part when Sakura "died", but did You really have to get another woman for Sasuke-kun? ;)

And I guess it was about the Nickleback song "Savin' me" :) I like that song.

And I liked the narration :)

And thank You SO MUCH for not being a cruel author :)
Dark Angelx3 chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
This is a really good story! I loved the suspense in it lol
els1324 chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
Aww...that was sad...but the ending was awesome! 0
Boinkydoink chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
The ending was a bit too 'perfect world' if you know what I'm saying.

Sasuke gives up his lifelong goal... Itachi submits to some woman... Sasuke has NO evidence of hating Itachi in his tone. Part of his motivation to kill Itachi was to protect his precious people, BUT a lot of it was pure anger and thirst for vengeance. A yearning for retaliation, you know? I don't think Sasuke'd just let that go with no REAL given reason. I mean... It's been a big part of his character development, and a determining factor of his more important decisions in the series.

The grammar and mechanics are ALOMOST perfect, so that's something.

To sum it up, you need to work on character behavior justification and essence, but THANK YOU for being literate.
ElephantRoom chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
aw that was so sad and cute and then cute and adorable...i loved it!
Ur2tRoUbLeSoMe90 chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
Wow! I liked it alot! Great story!