|Reviews for More Than A Fairytale|
| Teal chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
Great voice too. You have good narrating skills that make the characters come alive. The inner thoughts are very realistic and in character.
Ending with a rhetorical question was great, very memorable.
| Love me yes chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Honestly, i loved your story. It's very well written and affecting.. Great. If I met someone like this person who thinks like that I would lost in they thoughts and conversation. It's interesting though.