Reviews for More Than A Fairytale
Teal chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
Great story.

Great voice too. You have good narrating skills that make the characters come alive. The inner thoughts are very realistic and in character.

Ending with a rhetorical question was great, very memorable.

Teal
Love me yes chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Honestly, i loved your story. It's very well written and affecting.. Great. If I met someone like this person who thinks like that I would lost in they thoughts and conversation. It's interesting though.