Reviews for Not Right
Guest chapter 2 . 7/27/2015
Evil Boy Genius chapter 2 . 9/13/2013
Dude your the one telling the story you tell us
ObsessedWith chapter 16 . 6/17/2007
This is my favorite chapter out of all of 're a good writer,i like your was a great story,and i lke that Rebbeca is nice instead of a mean bitch that broke Shawn's heart like in all the other a good charcter like that.I really like this story,it's probally my favorite out of all the favorites I story.I will stop writing now,it's like I'm babbling(lol) like Shawn.
doCHAI chapter 16 . 6/11/2007

i love this thing!

actually, i love steph/h

and i don't see much shane/marissa stories so this is actually new...
doCHAI chapter 15 . 6/11/2007
ok lang kina randy at john mag-alaga ng bata? woah... wait till there's poop
doCHAI chapter 14 . 6/11/2007
doCHAI chapter 13 . 6/11/2007
doCHAI chapter 12 . 6/11/2007
ang swerte naman ni mitch... sana pag naging nurse na ako mangyari sa akin yon. lol.

kailan ba mamamatay si steph? lol (wag sana)
doCHAI chapter 11 . 6/11/2007
sige lang... tawa lang habang buhay pa si steph... lol

mamamatay ba xa?
doCHAI chapter 10 . 6/11/2007
holy bananas!

sabi ko na nga ba mamamatay na si steph...

tsk tsk

mamamatay nga ba xa?
doCHAI chapter 9 . 6/11/2007
holy bananas!

i was imagining this one and what if this really happened? well, i wouldn't really care because i would think that that was scripted...

besides, i was pre occupied by the fact that it was trish's last appearance at unforgiven...

lol, if this really happened, sulit yung 150 na binayad sa sinehan...
doCHAI chapter 8 . 6/11/2007
lol...the 2 already know the problems of their respective wives but paul still doesn't!
doCHAI chapter 7 . 6/11/2007
papansin naman si steph... away pang sabihin kung bakit...
doCHAI chapter 6 . 6/11/2007
a dream is a wish your heart makes when you're fast asleep...

lol. just kiddin'. that one's from cinderella. lol. anyway, tawang-tawa ako dun sa may 'sniff' part. lol. kasi naman, sinisipon ako ngayon...

i'm still reading...
doCHAI chapter 5 . 6/11/2007

she's concerned!

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