|Reviews for Not Right|
| Evil Boy Genius chapter 2 . 9/13/2013
Dude your the one telling the story you tell us
| ObsessedWith chapter 16 . 6/17/2007
This is my favorite chapter out of all of 're a good writer,i like your was a great story,and i lke that Rebbeca is nice instead of a mean bitch that broke Shawn's heart like in all the other a good charcter like that.I really like this story,it's probally my favorite out of all the favorites I story.I will stop writing now,it's like I'm babbling(lol) like Shawn.
| doCHAI chapter 16 . 6/11/2007
i love this thing!
actually, i love steph/h stories...lol
and i don't see much shane/marissa stories so this is actually new...
| doCHAI chapter 15 . 6/11/2007
ok lang kina randy at john mag-alaga ng bata? woah... wait till there's poop involved...lol
| doCHAI chapter 14 . 6/11/2007
| doCHAI chapter 13 . 6/11/2007
| doCHAI chapter 12 . 6/11/2007
ang swerte naman ni mitch... sana pag naging nurse na ako mangyari sa akin yon. lol.
kailan ba mamamatay si steph? lol (wag sana)
| doCHAI chapter 11 . 6/11/2007
sige lang... tawa lang habang buhay pa si steph... lol
mamamatay ba xa?
| doCHAI chapter 10 . 6/11/2007
sabi ko na nga ba mamamatay na si steph...
mamamatay nga ba xa?
| doCHAI chapter 9 . 6/11/2007
i was imagining this one and what if this really happened? well, i wouldn't really care because i would think that that was scripted...
besides, i was pre occupied by the fact that it was trish's last appearance at unforgiven...
lol, if this really happened, sulit yung 150 na binayad sa sinehan...
| doCHAI chapter 8 . 6/11/2007
lol...the 2 already know the problems of their respective wives but paul still doesn't!
| doCHAI chapter 7 . 6/11/2007
papansin naman si steph... away pang sabihin kung bakit...
| doCHAI chapter 6 . 6/11/2007
a dream is a wish your heart makes when you're fast asleep...
lol. just kiddin'. that one's from cinderella. lol. anyway, tawang-tawa ako dun sa may 'sniff' part. lol. kasi naman, sinisipon ako ngayon...
i'm still reading...
| doCHAI chapter 5 . 6/11/2007
| doCHAI chapter 4 . 6/11/2007
so that's why...