Story WAS good now its just stupid

This is really good! I'm loving the dark willow storyline. It's rare you see vampires used on such a grand scale, and seeing them slowly taking over Amestris has been terrifying and fun!

A shame to see that this died out but it was a very interesting read throughout and I enjoyed reading it years later. I was surprised at first to see FMA 2003 Anime rather than Brotherhood or the Manga but considering when it was written I suppose I shouldn't be surprised.

Love this truly. You really write best crossovers. Shame you're a poor finisher.

Damnit havoc

Bad willow bad stop being a big bad.

Willow you need help serious help.

In case you're interested, I noticed some typos. You tend to write 'boarder' instead of 'border'. A 'border' is the limit of a country, and a 'boarder' is a person paying rent to live somewhere.

You also tend to write 'then' instead of 'than'. 'Than' is used to compare stuff (EX: She is taller than him.) and 'then' is used as a measure of time, to explain that something is done after somehing else (EX: He prepared some food and then he ate it.)

You also wrote 'heals' instead of 'heels' when talking about shoes. 'Heals' is used in present tense for the verb 'to heal' as in, to improve someone's health. A 'heel' is the part at the end of someone's show or foot. A woman will wear shoes with high heels, NOT with high 'heals'.

Update please. Omg I love this so much. I'm somexcited for the Dawn/Buffy reunion. Even the Buffy/willow reunion is much anticipated. Why couldn't Willow accept that Buffy doesn't belong to earth anymore?

Damn. I just caught up with the story and daaaaamn. I really love how this story is going although I've been frustrated (in a good way?) that Dawn keeps missing Buffy. But I love how you're really exploring Dark Willow which I felt the show failed to really sink its teeth into.

But also I love how you're exploring how Buffy would put a wrench into FMA (or at least first version of FMA) and how her Slayer side is getting more play because her memory is on the fritz.

Anyway, thank you for this story and I hope you haven't given up on it!

I love this story! It's one of the few crossovers I've read that have been able to grab my attention and keep it. Are you planning on continuing it? I know I am dying to read more. Especially with the cliff hanger it ends on!

Vampires thinking the homunculi are demons is pretty funny. Makes sense, I mean they're even harder to kill than vampires AND they heal a lot faster, so makes sense that they'd think that.

Huh, Izumi's casual violence towards people she's training is a bit more disturbing when the trainee in question comes from a non-anime universe without all the comic violence.

Liking the movement towards a sister reunion in this chapter!

Wow, what a beautiful friendship. I wish my friends would raise the dead and cross dimensions and turn an entire town into a vampire nest just to get my attention! I'm sure Buffy will appreciate it A LOT.

Dawn to the rescue! Or ... not.

Couldn't leave a review on the last chapter because I already have once before (why, fanfiction dot net? Why shouldn't I leave multiple reviews on a chapter?) but anyway here's the review I was GOING to leave:

I've read this before, but it's been so long that I've forgotten almost everything, so it's kind of like reading it for the first time. Also, I hadn't watched any BtVS at all, so I missed a lot of references (like Greed giving Buffy Spike flashbacks) (and, well, pretty much everything to do with Buffy and her people). I'm really liking all the stuff you worked into it! Also, liking that some of the snappy dialogue has a Buffy-esque feel to it. Most of all, I'm loving Buffy dropping into the FMA universe and almost instantly wreaking havoc wherever evil is to be found.