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Ice Queen1957 chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
Hey, I really like how they were going to kill him because he served no purpose. I can totally see that - they did want to kill the other pretender when he wasn't much use anymore, so they'd totally have no quams about doing it to a kid.

PS: Ignore Annette. She's a special kind of insane. (She thinks a beta reader is someone who writes the story for you, and I'm being totally serious here.)

Yay, challenge responce :)
Annette chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
Nice story, but totally unfactual. Actually, although it would make people who are average to pat themselves on the back that two highly intelligent people, one who is a Pretender and one who is not but whom the Centre gave her the education and training to act like one, to have an average child. You see, some people say, "I know you are both geniuses, but your child might not be one." when what they really mean, "bI really hate that you both are so smart, I would really really love that your kid will just work as a dish washer. Then I can gloat!"
Tess chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
This is a terrific start, can't wait to see where you take it from here.
Nans chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Great beginning

Gemini-M chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
Hi 24,

Interesting little challenge story. Please continue.

Jim23 chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
where is the story?