Reviews for The Once and Future Taiyoukai
foxcat chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Shippou is correctly spelled in Japanese with a 'u' (changing the pronunciation where the 'o' sound is prolonged for twice the length of a single 'o'). Shippou's name is a pun on the word shippo (meaning tail). Shippou means the 7 treasures.

I find it unbelievable from a canon (anime) point of view that Kagome would talk to Sesshoumaru, or that Kagome would call out Inuyasha's name when she knew that the youkai was not Inuyasha. However, I have not kept up-to-date with the manga as those volumes have not yet been released in Australia, so I don't know if you are true to canon or not.

Anyway, the rest was okay, although i skimmed over a bit of the origami part. Hope to see better chapters in future, ja!
raspberrysorbet chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Is Kagome safe in her own time?
Maddie50 chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
Excellent first chapter. I think the dialogue flowed well, and Inuyasha is still an idiot (in my opinion). I am interested in reading more.
Sirexais chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
Interesting... Hurry up and update. This is the only het pairing I read
Wenchster chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
Hey ol' chum! it's great to be back reviewing your work. It always brings a smile to my face! _

I admit that it hurt a little too. And you know what part it was i bet. The claypot and InuYasha if you didn't see that one coming. (::sigh::) Please don't make them to gushy cause I can't stand how InuYasha wants to be with claypot ONLY for guilt. Sometimes you have to wonder what kind of baka things go on in the minds of the dogs. (::arg::) Then I could help them use common sense. What a world changer that sort of power could do! lol.

Back to the basics. So Yasha can't get to Kagome's time? If that ever happend I'd would have thought Inu would go haywire. Poor Kags. It must be hard being told be someone you love that your preety useless and then 'pop' here comes the real deal and your just the copy. I feel like kicking some ass when it comes to that. How rude and mean of them. Its time for the new anticipated couple to begin though...Shesshomaru and Kagome! I'm kinda excited for this ya know. Yay!

(::sigh::) Excuse my randomness.

Hopefully won't be *too* long till I see read your peices again! A true reader till the end chibi!


motto beni chaper! _-
amusewithaview chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
Oh! Intrigue! Kikyo is almost ALWAYS bashed in stories I've read where she's involved. I like that Inu isn't in love with EITHER of them, poor guy's already stuck between a rock and a hard place: why add barbed wire?

Gotta admit, I'm a total and complete Sesshy-lover. I did a little dance-of-joy when I saw that you were about to begin a Sesshymance.


Madison chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
That was very very good! I can't wait to read chapter
Crow Skywalker chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
I've been waiting for this fic ever since I first read the summary for it. And here it is, and it's great! Nice start...I can't wait to read more of it.
ohiowriter chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
I hope you truely live for reviews as you stated. You get so many of them and also my computer doesn't like to give me the review box and it is a pain to get it to give it to me. I am probably just as excited to read this fic as you are to write it. I know you have a bussy life but please don't take too long. It now takes me half an hour/45 minutes to get to school because I'm a PSEO student (high school student going to college), so I can't push things to the last minute any more (pouts). I can't wait for more.
kitt90 chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
oh i wonder what'll happen next! plz update soon i really like it!
NotesandPhotographs chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
*adds one more reason to her 'why this day was the most amazing day in a long time' list*

YAY! Another story from you :D! This one looks rather interesting, and I can't wait to see where it goes. I'm already in love with it. Well good luck with the next chapter. I shall be waiting for it.


bobalina chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
I am consumed by melancholy. Something interesting happen, por favor! Keep writing!


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