I loved Ann from the start. I enjoy her intelligence, though not many normal children would be that witty, but I wouldn't have her any different. I think the story's great! Excited for the next!

Interesting, very interesting. A well put-together fic, but it feels like there should have been more to the story then what's there. Overall its quite good.

lol, I love the name, but "taa" keeps getting added in or something. I like it and shall add it to my favourites!

Very engaging! I look forward to the next chapter.

8 out of 10 stars.

This was interesting. I'm I going to be seeing any more chapters soon?

Some of your formatting's gone wonky, there are weird codes in your text. But, seems like a good story, and I hope you continue it!