|Reviews for Over and In|
| Ocean Starfly chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Wow. This was really awesome. I almost cried when Kaitou was killed. The writing is awesome and I didn't notice any grammar problems, either.
It feels a little... unfinished. As Kaitou pointed out, why was Hakuba being nice to him? Akako saving him was explained but Hakuba wasn't. It's partly because of the way it skips/is separated into sections that are only loosely tied together. However, that is also part of its appeal. Overall, it's powerful but could use some improvement to tie it together more. Great job.
| bobbyneko chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
How incredibly sad, but how incredibly well written. Your skilled writing makes up for the fact that I'm creeped out and want to cry right now.
Amazing job, really.
| Yaraslava Rada chapter 1 . 12/11/2006
Hum...This story is a little confusing...But, I liked it none-the-less.