Reviews for Altered Destinies
Vampireking40 chapter 2 . 10/1
The way he was treated at the orphanage is like how Oliver Twist was treated especially if all they ate was gruel.
horus4242 chapter 4 . 9/20
why are you having him buy a new owl when he bought one in the 1st chapter. this is a good story but I cannot read something that is so inconsistent. perhaps you need to go back and read it through to fix all the mistakes
horus4242 chapter 1 . 9/20
What was the point of him buying clothes in the future if you were going to have him just go shopping again in the past. If you like I can be a beta so I can help you clear out these inconsistencies
horus4242 chapter 1 . 9/20
Okay pick one: him having the scar will take him directly to voldemort or the magic from the time Turner will send him back to the same spot he left.
ClaireR89 chapter 39 . 9/19
I really don't like that you killed Sarah.
Guest chapter 22 . 9/17
Allen Rickman was the person who played Snape RIP
Guest chapter 20 . 9/17
Ya know this was made 10 years ago and it’s very unique in a good way

I hope “James Evens” AKA the count AKA Harry Potter is the one to defeat Grindelwald instead of Dumbledore
ClaireR89 chapter 9 . 9/19
A few errors a side and many spelling or missing words a side. This story is quite impressive. It's hard to stop reading
ClaireR89 chapter 8 . 9/19
Homosexuals we're pink triangles not squares.
ClaireR89 chapter 6 . 9/19
Have Harry explain what's going to happen! At this point who cares if he changes the future too much
ddentler21 chapter 4 . 9/9
Too fluffy of a story for my tastes, good work though
Amarillie chapter 14 . 8/28
I'm Polish. Thank you for writing about war in such way.
Jen chapter 39 . 8/13
Loved it
ezmegaz chapter 4 . 8/11
There cannot be 393 tiles in the hospital wing. That would mean 3 rows of 131 tiles (or 131 rows of 3 tiles), 131 being a prime number. Would be either a very narrow and/or long room or the tiles would be narrow themselves.

I know that this has absolutely zero bearings on the story and is probably uninteresting for anyone, but I had to mention it... Yes, I am a sad person with no life.
Darth Krande chapter 3 . 8/10
Cute. (And a ton of kudos for "baby" Moody! )
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