Reviews for Altered Destinies |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The nurse has done nothing to warrant any attention from Harry, nor was him casting a levitation charm impressive. It is a first-year spell and would only be impressive if it was done without a wand. I don't mind Harry adopting "Tommy" (Not a fan of the name change), but that aside, the whole chapter was rushed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story, o.m.g. |
![]() ![]() Love the story, kept my interest thru out the chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() my god, this is going nowhere... progress the story you could have fit all this in 1 chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it wrong that although I loved the story, I don't want there to be a sequel?! I just want them to live happily ever after! Great writing. Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() I kind of dont like this nurse, I thought this story would only be about Harry and little Tommy. if you put romance into the mix... I'm out. thanks for sharing, I like the intro |
![]() ![]() Congratulations on writing a WW2 story with Harry that works! I loved all the little touches- a Hermione-like Minerva, Peeves, an explanation of what changed Slytherin- but the time travel and the integrating of WW2 with the Grindelwald dark magic and Tom was so clever. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() Actually Saint Jerome is the saint of Library's. |
![]() ![]() Yeah Ron eats alot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! What a great story, thank you for writing it. |
![]() ![]() Evans you said Evan . You forgot the s. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Superb story. It really has caught my imagination and attention. Loved it! |
![]() ![]() Serpensortia was invented by Severus Snape it was not around when Tom was in Hogwarts. |
![]() ![]() Correction in Harry Potter the movie there were five boys and five girls to each year to each house .Giving Hogwarts 280 students. |
![]() ![]() Great story the ending was terrific. |