|Reviews for The Maze|
| Begoogled chapter 3 . 9/17/2006
What could those strange sensor-readings mean? Is space in this area filled with anomalies, like the Expanse? Is it like a fata morgana? Or a cloaking technology?
I hope to find out soon! And let's hope that Enterprise will come out of this contact unscathed!
| volley chapter 3 . 9/17/2006
It's an intriguing story. If you'll allow me a little constructive criticism, I believe your story would improve greatly if you 'showed' a bit of the characters expressions and inner feelings. I, for one, miss that. I'm curious to see what happens next...
| volley chapter 2 . 9/16/2006
Well, first of all I'm in awe. I'd never manage to write a story with so much technobabble that actually makes sense! Great job! And secondly, I hope you're not going to leave us hanging with that cliffhanger for long... though I'm confident our Malcolm will take care of those missiles! :-)
| nexis44 chapter 1 . 9/15/2006