|Reviews for Fighting Chaos Part II: Unfinished Business|
| sparra-music chapter 12 . 7/17/2016
I don't know why I thought for a single second that I would be done weeping after Alan's death when I read that there was a part 2 to this story.
Congratulations, you have thoroughly broken my heart and used up all my kleenex.
| Gianna di Fiori chapter 12 . 1/19/2016
Still crying. This was so powerful, so moving. You do like to pull out hearts and stomp on them, don't you?
| Cutter12 chapter 12 . 5/25/2012
First thing I have to say is - Poor Colby! This is the second story I've read from you where the more Colby tries to make it better, the worse it becomes. :D
Very emotional story, my heart kept going out to both Don & Charlie.
| epalladino chapter 12 . 6/18/2009
Excellent followup to the earlier story. Thanks, Beth
| An-Jelly-Ca chapter 12 . 8/10/2008
I completely and totally loved the ending to this story.
Both this story and the one before it were completely amazing.
Great chapter. That being said, I'm going to bed now.
| An-Jelly-Ca chapter 11 . 8/10/2008
| An-Jelly-Ca chapter 10 . 8/10/2008
Great chapter! I love the story!
| An-Jelly-Ca chapter 9 . 8/10/2008
| An-Jelly-Ca chapter 8 . 8/10/2008
Oh God. Poor Charlie. Great chapter!
| An-Jelly-Ca chapter 7 . 8/10/2008
I'm glad Don's back home now. Great chapter!
| An-Jelly-Ca chapter 6 . 8/10/2008
Charlie wanted his daddy.
Poor Charlie. Give him his daddy back.
| An-Jelly-Ca chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
I'm glad Larry came to help Charlie. Great chapter!
| An-Jelly-Ca chapter 4 . 8/10/2008
| An-Jelly-Ca chapter 3 . 8/10/2008
Great chapter! I love the story.
| An-Jelly-Ca chapter 2 . 8/10/2008