Reviews for Fighting Chaos Part II: Unfinished Business
sparra-music chapter 12 . 7/17/2016
I don't know why I thought for a single second that I would be done weeping after Alan's death when I read that there was a part 2 to this story.

Congratulations, you have thoroughly broken my heart and used up all my kleenex.
Gianna di Fiori chapter 12 . 1/19/2016
Still crying. This was so powerful, so moving. You do like to pull out hearts and stomp on them, don't you?
Cutter12 chapter 12 . 5/25/2012
First thing I have to say is - Poor Colby! This is the second story I've read from you where the more Colby tries to make it better, the worse it becomes. :D

Very emotional story, my heart kept going out to both Don & Charlie.
epalladino chapter 12 . 6/18/2009
Excellent followup to the earlier story. Thanks, Beth
An-Jelly-Ca chapter 12 . 8/10/2008
I completely and totally loved the ending to this story.

Both this story and the one before it were completely amazing.

Great chapter. That being said, I'm going to bed now.
An-Jelly-Ca chapter 11 . 8/10/2008
Amazing chapter.
An-Jelly-Ca chapter 10 . 8/10/2008
Great chapter! I love the story!
An-Jelly-Ca chapter 9 . 8/10/2008
Fantastic chapter!
An-Jelly-Ca chapter 8 . 8/10/2008
Oh God. Poor Charlie. Great chapter!
An-Jelly-Ca chapter 7 . 8/10/2008
I'm glad Don's back home now. Great chapter!
An-Jelly-Ca chapter 6 . 8/10/2008
Charlie wanted his daddy.

Poor Charlie. Give him his daddy back.
An-Jelly-Ca chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
I'm glad Larry came to help Charlie. Great chapter!
An-Jelly-Ca chapter 4 . 8/10/2008
Fantastic chapter!
An-Jelly-Ca chapter 3 . 8/10/2008
Great chapter! I love the story.
An-Jelly-Ca chapter 2 . 8/10/2008
Great chapter!
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