|Reviews for To Love|
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
Don't have an account
So did Sasuke..and did that...but then they were...but the thing...bullet...whaaa? I am confuse but satisfied, if not a little broken hearted, with fic. I absolutely loved it! It's just so... 3
| sasunarulvr4eva chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
so good! and the death scene...
| Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitten chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
PLEASE CHECK MY NEW POLL! thx...
Heya! I totally loved it! Plz UD ASAP... Pretty Please With Sugar On Top... xD
- Angel Girl Julia -
| Ali chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Aw! ;3; TT_TT B-but...No! Sasuke! Naruto! Oh i loved this one...Even thought it was sad! I need some fluff now...TTTT
| flourescized chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
omgs i have a crit, for like the first time ever. it's miniscule, but it's there all the same. In the first sentence:
Naruto had never known what love really is.
You switched from past-tense to present tense in the middle of it. It should really be:
Naruto had never known what love really was.
And if there's a present tense equivalent, my english language skills have failed me cos I can't for the life of me figure it out.
Other than that;
C'est magnifique! I think that means what I want it to, but if it doesn't then basically it's amazing.. more than amazing. You're amazing, more than amazing! Whee, I love you.. and my French teacher would be ashamed. That makes me happy, she was a bitch anyway.
I say that wayy too often, but whatever.
| fakiagirl chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
I really liked this one!
The only mistake I saw was ". . . as long as their lungs could handle." You might want to put an "it" there at the end. :)
But great story! So sad, but well written and well put together. I like how you focused on Naruto's thoughts on love, and showed the you-don't-know-something's-precious-until-you-loose-it aspect of it. Great job! fav
| a dreamer's attic chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
oh, angsy sweet...
| Kiki-chan94 chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
for half an hour : get
| S.S chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
Damn you...this is making me cry. Do you find pleasure in my anguish? Huh? But seriously overall, very very good. I make it a rule to stay away from angst related fics, but I couldn't resist. So thank you, thank you for reminding me why I stay away from such things.
| KinkyPerfection chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
I'm sad now
| Deaths Vengence chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
Wow! This story is so fluffy, but sad... boo hoo... anyways... me and my friend were talkin' on the phone while readin' this story and she's jealous because your stories are so much more fluffier than hers! If she sees this she'll kill me! haha! (note to self: tell her about review) XD
| fallen-forgotten-faith chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
OH MY GOSH. That was... fantastic. nice. great. and all things good. XD SasuNaru :))
| Sahk chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
-falls to ground spasming-
Death.. fic.. no... -moan-
-pops up- Darnit. I hate sad stuff, it makes me sad. Pfft. :/
| Wing of Darkness chapter 1 . 11/23/2006
Uh...sobs...then cries waterfall...why would that be the end?...
| Arika-of-the-Demons chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
gah okay i'm sad now...sniffle...still very well done i just got to go read something happy...