|Reviews for Deep As You Go|
| neidr91 chapter 1 . 3/1
I loved the Hyuuga and this was perfect. This is more like how I think Hanabi and her relationship with Hinata is. Thank you for the great read.
| Mayaku no Yuki chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Your story is extremely inspiring, so I kinda wrote a different ending... sorry? I couldn't help it, and- well, you can do whatever you want with it. Hope you like it, but I'm a bad writer, so maybe not.
Hanabi tripped over her feet. "She didn't tell you? Why not? Is she okay?"
He stopped, suddenly, and turned to her, looking at Hanabi dead in the eyes. “She’s in a coma,” he said quietly. “The doctors don’t know when she’ll wake up… If she’ll ever wake up.”
Hanabi forgot how to breathe.
An hour later, Hanabi is there, at the hospital, staring at her sister’s serene face.
/I was just thinking that it would be a truly regrettable if I died, and I didn't know my sister at al,l.
Hinata’s voice echoes in her head, and for some reason, it sounds cold, blank, /dead/.
“I’m sorry,” Hanabi breathes, loud and quiet all at the same time. Quiet in a sad, guilty way, loud in a room so completely and utterly silent...
“I’m sorry,” she repeats,” that you didn’t know my favorite color, and my hobbies, and- “Hanabi cuts herself off, and blinks back the tears that threatened to escape.
“And I’m sorry, that I didn’t know you either.”
Yeah, I'm a angsty person. I hope you like this, and I hope you know you're an amazing writer.
| LonelyDreamer7 chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Awww... Go Hinata go! XD loved the ending. Loved it; hell I loved the whole damn thing!
| little-hina chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Great job you've done here. I really like this story!
| GalanthaDreams chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
It brought happy tears to my eyes.
| Hijokugei chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Sweet. Like a bar of dark chocolate.
| MisSs005 chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Wow- can't believe I never checked out your other fics. Man I've missed out.. ;))
Anyhow.. this was quite lovely. You managed to create a realistic plot concerning these two characters- without making them overly cosy or arch-enemy-ish as sisters (which is sadly something many authors here don't manage to). Well done.
| Hinata C. Blue chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
oh my gosh, I nearly cried reading this, it was so beautiful and in-character. I adore sister-fics (Naruto fandom is seriously lacking in them) and this was just wonderfully written. I love your writing, and your portrayal of the Hyuuga sisters. Thanks so much for writing this!
| Esum Amla chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
This was a very sweet story. I loved it. Thank you for sharing.
| Evy L. Green chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
Lovely. I just...am near speechless. I guess this hit close to home, and the fact that you were able to portray thoughts and feelings well enough to allow the reader to relate proves how good this was. The entire thing was just beautiful in all it's simplicity, and the honest confusion coming from Hanabi made it all the more interesting to read. I really can't express how nice it was to read this, you did an amazing job.
| metaphorically-blue chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
I went through three pages of cracky gross pairings just for this fic. Because it was gorgeous. And love. OMG. The relationship was perfect. Great job.
| joanne chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
I love it. It's fantastic !
| Kira chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Aww.. this was very sweet.. it seems like something Hinata would definitely do if their relationship had been like this. Nicely done
| Kitsune no Rai chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
Good job. I really like this fic. You descrbed their emotions well.
| Yudachi chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
Did this use to be a song fic?
Deep As You Go by October Project. Was it?