Reviews for Defence of the Realm
Az chapter 2 . 8/11/2007
Its a great idea.

Ive read the first two traveller books and I am trying to get into your story.

First of all, I do like the back storys. Theres always a new story or chapter right there.

But the thing that bothers me is the swarm. What realm are they from? There are only 6 realms. The first is like hell or hades, the second is the realm of hungry ghosts, the third is a garden of eden like forest, the fourth is our own, the fifth is the realm of the half-gods and the sixth is the realm of the gods.

Much more explanation is needed to tell us where the swarm is from as a traveller can only travel to these 6 realms.

Hope ive been of help.

~Aaron~
Wiseelm1 chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
I absoultly love the book 'The Traveller', your story does the book good justice, not sure about some of the gadgets but meh thats just a small thing that annoys me about lots of stories.

I really cant wait for your next chapter just make sure its as good as this one. You dont happen to know when the next book is coming out do you? if it isnt already?