|Reviews for Bathsheba|
| kandita chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
This is the time feel like slapping the f**k out of Hinata! She just ruined a prefect f**king moment...and what kind of name is that? Of all the beautiful Japanese names u chose that?(sorry I'm just mad)...as for Hinata I absolutely hate 1st off she's gonna tell Sasuke that she dosen't love him like she loves Naruto. Well! If she loved Naruto as much as she's claiming she would have never opened her legs to another man and worst she was gonna try and give him a jacket! Another mans child! She needs a slap
| kandita chapter 3 . 1/9/2013
Damn this is some good sh*t. And, Kabuto I mean damn I hate him but I love his master Irochimaru. I feel really bad for Naruto they both did him dirty especially Sasuke he's a a**hole
| Joaninuwolf13 chapter 5 . 11/21/2007
this story is really good. i really like the pairing of sasuke and hinata. some people think they are not cute but i think they are good for each other. i don't know if you are going to make more chapters but i would really like to know what happens. Is hinata going to find out that is was sasuke who got naruto killed?
| Goddess of Scandinavia chapter 5 . 7/14/2007
don't kil the poor baby...
| hmfan24 chapter 5 . 1/1/2007
I told myself not to grow attached to the child I said that! darn it, now I bet I'll cry next chapter. You will update, right?
| hmfan24 chapter 4 . 1/1/2007
I cried more, of course... well, I'm going to read the next chapter.
| hmfan24 chapter 3 . 1/1/2007
I'm used to the blood, sigh. I couldn't control my tears. I'm so...sobs loudly.
THE PAIN THE AGONY OF HAVING THE COURAGE TO FORGIVE SOMEONE WHO HAS TAKEN THE LITTLE THINGS YOU HAVE! IT PAINS MY HEART TO SEE SOMEONE WITH THAT GREAT OF KINDNESS DIE WITH A FORGIVING HEART.
Okay, well according to the Bible the next chapter will be just as sad.
| hmfan24 chapter 2 . 1/1/2007
why does he have to die? its so wrong! *cries hard* I cried when I read the scripture. good story I must say...
| oztan chapter 5 . 12/6/2006
Interesting I like read what happens next.
| Delirious Akuto chapter 5 . 11/12/2006
What! I said Sasuke get punished not the babby! That is evil I think Sasuke should get beat or something or Hinata find out what he did to Naruto that woutld be good! Yeah Sasuke would finally understand that he was very selfish! Well I like your story I just hope the baby doesn't die! That would be so sad! Well update soon
| rcr chapter 5 . 11/11/2006
Oh...like they say...what goes up...(eventually) comes down. Sasuke paid for his wrong doing, because he knew it was wrong, yet he did it.
| thursdayMD chapter 5 . 11/10/2006
after reading Kakashi's last four words, "your child will die," i became all wide-eyed like this, "WHA? O_O!" I didn't expect THAT. i initially thought something 'direct' to happen to sasuke like physical torture, but this makes more sense since he killed naruto causing hinata pain; therefore, his love one should be taken to pain him. but i feel bad for sasuke, now that he's starting a family, and as the saying goes, "two wrongs can't make a right." also, physical pain can heal, but emotional ones sometimes never... so hopefully sasuke and hinata will be okay mentally-wise after this.
oh yes, and 'Nanashi' is a fitting name choice cause ... well... i wouldn't know how to name sasuhina's kids only Masashi Kishimoto would know exactly how to name his characters' kid. so 'without name' works perfectly!
| field innocence chapter 5 . 11/9/2006
that was great! update soon.
| Delirious Akuto chapter 4 . 10/31/2006
That was a good chapter I think Sasuke should suffer for a while for what he did! He needs to feel bad for what he did then I will have sympathiy for him. Well I like your story so far and hope you can update soon!
| Angel-EyesXxX chapter 4 . 10/29/2006
its really great, keep up the good work :D