|Reviews for Wish There Were Ghosts|
| Goldencity chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Wow. Wow, wow, WOW. I LOVE this. It's hauntingly beautiful, and depressing, and very well written, and beautiful, and perfect. LOVE it! I love Farid so much, and I think this summed up exactly how he felt when Dustfinger was dead. I love the line this is based on; it fit the situation perfectly.
Some of my favroite lines are:
Dreaming of the one thing I can't have,
The one thing far away.
Hating myself for saving him once,
But failing in the end.
Hating the fact that I can do nothing, now.
And then I LOVE the last line: And for the first time, I wish there were ghosts.
The whole thing is absolutely beautiful. WONDERFUL job on it.
| Daffodil chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Aww. I love this! :)
| tjwritter chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
Wow! That's all I can say! Just WOW!
Seriously good job!
| londongrammar chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
That was so haunting! Yet beautiful,it was great!
| Estarla chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
I thought it was really good! I liked it a lot. Like a lot a lot! Great job!
| krisymkk chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
this is kinda sad.
| Ryan Brooklyn chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
Wow. That was hauntingly beautiful . . . wow. Great job! :-D
| Mysticstar chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
Aww, that's so good! xD Awsomeness! I'd say update, but it's just a oneshot, so... FAVOURITES!
| PrettyInPink16 chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
Wow man! That was so fabuloso! I Love it! I wish I could write poems like that. I could make an attempt, but it would never be as good as yours. I would love to be able to write poetry that is actually good. I'm more of a story person. But I've only written one Inheart story, well one FanFic actually, and it was not a long one either. So I have to work on one but whatever I'll think of something. I tend to be a rambler too. But anyways... Love the poem!
| Bastakils chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
flows good once again should keep on posting
| Duckweed chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
Aw, poor Farid.
| The Bunnies Will Kill Us All chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
that was really good. you will have no critcism from me.
| ChrissyBear chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
AWASOME i read ur other one Inkstained and left a really long review and once again might i add SPECTAULARASTIC. You are a great writer and really need to continue posting things before u email me or any thing read my other review please thxz. Honestly, PLEASE continue writing ur super i cant wait till ur next story or poem.
Ta-Ta for Now
P.S. I cried to wwhen he(Dusty) died ARGG it hurt he should be real and 13 i would so date him.