Reviews for Long Overdue
sagey chapter 5 . 9/10/2011
loved it and a great ending to this story..loved the ceremony and looking forward to reading more of your stories..

J/T are so good together...and i sam and jack together..

sheppardlover928 chapter 5 . 9/10/2011
What a wonderful story! You did a terrific job with the ceremony-it was so symbolic and beautiful and -okay-I cry at weddings, in real life, on TV, in stories-and your story! It was beautiful!
sherry57 chapter 5 . 9/10/2011
Beautiful! You may have taken a long time to finish this story, but it was worth the wait...absolutely perfect hon...thanks!
Trinitystargazer3 chapter 5 . 9/10/2011
Great chapter. I loved the ceremony. I don't think I could come up with a totally original wedding ceremony. At least not a good one. Great job!
BMick chapter 5 . 9/9/2011
The ceremony was beautiful - and yes, I could see it in my mind's eye. Your care and effort were well spent.
camcampgirl chapter 5 . 9/9/2011
I just wanted to say that I love your description of the Union Ceremony. It is such a simple ceremony, but very symbolic, emotional, and meaningful just the same. Great job! I am sure it was difficult to invent a "new" wedding ceremony, but you did a good job. My only complaint is that John & Teyla ended up together. I just never saw them together, for although they're really good friends, their characters on the show just never seemed to have the chemistry that John had with others. He even had more immediate and lasting chemistry with Larrin the Traveler than he seemed to with Teyla. With her, especially in the later seasons, he just seemed to be oblivious. At any rate, it's just a fic, and it was well written, so no harm done! Good job!
mendenbar chapter 5 . 9/9/2011
As you know, I am not a particular fan of the SG 'verse (except for your marvelous crossover pieces) but I found this very, very moving. Thanks for sharing it with me and I won't even point out whether I found any typos or grammatical errors! LOL.
scarletwitch0 chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
Nice update! Enjoying this story. Looking foward to the next chapter. I love Teyla/John fanfic.
sagey chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
loved it and well worth the wait...

loved john's thinking process and how in the end it just boiled down to what he already knew...he wants to spend the rest of his life with teyla...

and that he took the initiative and went to find her and tell her...

and that they both are on teh same track at last...sweet...great update and looking forward to more

sheppardlover928 chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
yes-Teyla and John! Teyla and John! Teyla and John!...and baby Sheppards! Keep it going!
JoeyLuv chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
Probably should have reviewed chapter by chapter, but I got caught up in the story. I'm really enjoying this fic! Always thought the showed cheated the fans regarding John and Teyla's relationship...on all levels. Sheppard is not a man of words, but a man of action. His emotions run very deep, but just doesn't know how to express with those he cares for the most. Look forward to more chapters.
sherry57 chapter 3 . 9/4/2011
Looking forward to the conversation between John and Teyla. Roll on the next chapter!
sagey chapter 3 . 9/3/2011
that was good to have teh guys come help johnout..and love the john is really thinking about it alla dn goingto find teyla..

love it adn looking forwward to more..

have to go check out your other stories

sagey chapter 2 . 9/3/2011
liked halling telling her some truthsa nd getting her to think...

sagey chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
as an avid j/T shipper how in the world have I missed this..

loved their talk and teyla likening it to daniel and vala...

and hope john steps up..

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