|Reviews for 2:53am|
| Fed up with this crap chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Well this was so different from what I was expecting. The last story I read with a time listed as the title was completely different. I like this oe, it's pretty good and strange in a way but good.
| Life Is A Highway66 chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
Aww... you are awesome at writing fluffy pieces... this is great!
| The PhantomHokage chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
Good story please keep writing
| Tama Saga chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
19 foot long? Ouch...
19' is 19 feet...
19" is 19 inches
If you meant some other height, I have no clue what to say except that I can't, disappointingly enough, mind read.
| Jussgee chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
| antijuicy chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
It reads a bit like a Post-it note: short, sweet, and to the point. It's also a bit like a Post-it note in the way that it doesn't really seem like a story, more like a character sketch. I'd put some more of Hermione's thoughts in and make Harry's reaction seem more realistic and "paint a picture" - ex. Harry involuntarily took a step backwards. His face was a study of shock and had turned deathly white. Hermione suddenly became afraid that he would faint, then and there...etc. You get it.
But overall, good :)