Reviews for The Nightmare Before Moonrise
OptimusxElita4ever chapter 8 . 8/28/2007
I'm reviewing! I'm reviewing! So this is the first fic Orcus appeared in? I read about him in some of your's and your friend Lady Starscream's fics. All are awesome! ;) Please please update soon!

Bumblebee: Glad Orcus's in that universe.

ME: He turns up in your universe in YP's and LS's other fics.

Bumblebee: O.O *gets dizzy and faints* xP

ME: *pulls on a wolf mask and waits for him to wake up* What? I love the Lambo twins so it was a matter of time before I acted like them. }:} (Grinch grin! XD) ;)
Lady Shockbox chapter 8 . 5/15/2007
Shockbox: (blinks) Holy... Slag...

Terrorsaur: (0.o) ...

Shockbox: (jumps from foot to foot) Good Primus in the Allspark, you HAVE to update this! Poor Megs... And Terr... And everyone else! Geez, with Orcus and Rampage in control of the Preds, who's going to stop them now! I hope you don't just plan on quiting here. (puppy dog eyes)

Waspinator: (stares at her) Shockbot creepy when zzhe doezz that. Shockbot know that?

Terrorsaur: (whispers in the wasp's audio receptor) She knows. She just plans on keeping it up because she's like that.

Shockbox: (grins and thumbs up) And don't worry about not getting reviews. It's an awesome ficcy. (jumps around) UPDATE SOON!
Wearer of the Black Hat chapter 4 . 11/1/2006
Very good. Yay for the return of Rhinox! That was Rhinox right. Well anywho. I still spotted a couple of misspellings. It might help if you read over it or have one of your friens read over it just before you put it up. Well anyway. Ttyl.
Fix-It Alchemist chapter 5 . 10/23/2006
who is there to pick from (has a giant spinner)

no serious i haven't watched this series of transformers. so who can i pick?
Fix-It Alchemist chapter 4 . 10/23/2006
Me: ...

Ed: what are you thinking?

Me: (what i was thinking about was that Ed would make a great fireplace mat)

Ed: *stares at thought bubbles and points it* UH... thats scary *pops the bubble*

Me: new stpry loves the way you really tye up that chapters together. *coughs* in other news

Ed: words

Me; i like the story
Fix-It Alchemist chapter 2 . 10/23/2006
Me: oK i gots one thing to say *coughs* (slap)

Ed: No sueing!

ME: oh ok i liked it

Raze: Now that was much better.

Me: sick bastard

Raze: *raised eyebrow*(i don't know what transformers have for lifting eyebrows lol ) you made me

Me: true true just go a kill sometime.

Raze: okey dokey

Me: he seems a bit out of charther lately.

Raze: (goes into a dark alley)

blood curling scream can be heard althe way form here.

Me: ... ok well that was akward.

Ed: hm... it must be the whole changing phases thingy.

Me: ._.' i don't got the insurance to pay up to the things he does anymore... STOP KILLING LAYWERS RAZE!

Raze: will do !
Fix-It Alchemist chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
Very and sad.

Raze: Yeah pity I'm not that mad man.

Me: Yeah

Raze; I mean pull out the spark and dismember the body that's old school he could have made the scence i bit more grutsome.

Me: o.O uh i see...

Raze: Goes on enjoying the scence.

Me; You Mister can't see Envy anymore.

Raze: Aw but we were going to make the philoser stone.

Me: With who? Uh nvm just go home.

Raze: Fine just wanted to say that your aunt went on a trip today very far away . It would be a shame if you didn't get to see her one last time.

Me: . . . ._.' oh fuck oph no you didn't (runs to the airport)

Raze: Gets her everything xD
Wearer of the Black Hat chapter 3 . 10/18/2006
Enjoyable story so far, but I'm misty on a few things. Is this a second expedition to earth before the autobots' awakening? And, is Cheetor in his Transmetal 2 form? Oh, and, I thought Dinobot was dead. Well I like and will continue to read it. Laters.
Storm Blue Lightning Saix chapter 8 . 10/13/2006
*claps* love it, love it , LOVE IT! and you're welcome! XD
Inkfamy chapter 8 . 10/13/2006
DD: Oh, God, what a bunch of mar- *gets decked by Cat*

RE: *cringes* Oh, that's gonna smart in the morning...

*smirk* I'm pretty sure it smarts now. Anyway. Cool. Please update soon.

Wolverine: *scowls* Why can't YOU write me a fic where I can torture people?

Because a) I'm too lazy, b) I can't be bothered, and c) I only write comedy or angst.

Wolverine: Gr...
The-Charcoal-Alchemist chapter 8 . 10/13/2006
T: *laughs maniacally with pleasure and showers RG w/boxes of pixie stix* THIS CHAPTER ROCKS!

DB: *is hiding her face* I KNEW letting her have frosting with breakfast was a bad idea...Thanks for puttin' me in, RG!
The-Charcoal-Alchemist chapter 7 . 9/26/2006
T: OO Ohh...COL!

DB: *hides* Great, now you gave her ideas!

T: Heck yeah she did! Great story, RG!
LadyStarscream chapter 2 . 9/24/2006
Hi. I saw you over at RedEyesDarknessDragonLady's RP. I didn't get to see which character you're using. Would it happen to be Orcus? just wondering.

and also, OMG!, a character more evil than Gryphon. OhSlag!

the RPers better watch out, huh?


Inkfamy chapter 5 . 9/23/2006
DD: *eye twitches* the... spelling...

Chill, DD. It's not that bad. And Wappy got terrified *cackle*.

RE: You're so mean. Both of you!


Update soon-... ish.
Storm Blue Lightning Saix chapter 4 . 9/21/2006
Tolero used to Rhinox right?
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